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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOW THIS IS WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR!!!!!!! I dont mean any offense to yaoi lovers but i was getting tired of seeing just yaoi. . . . now this is a story that i luv the thing that i was looking for exactly when it comes to the relationship between naruto and sasuke. . . that is exactly as i see them (as having an pretty much brotherly partnership) i am so into this fic it's amazing (and i don't even think about the grammar/spelling problems) i luv the way they interact. . . i laughed so hard through most all of the humor (those two should know better than to jump around in the house) anyway cant wait for more. . . .
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved the love scene between sakura and lee. . . thought it was great! the story is really good! *waits patiently for more* i feel sorry for those poor trees though. . . . (i think everyone would benefit greatly if kakashi was a striper)
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. So Sasuke left Konoha then three years later he tells Naruto to go back to where they last met and which turns out where they fought each other. Now when Sasuke comes back Naruto and Sakura were and made him feel welcome. Now why did you keep Hinata,Kiba,Chouji as gennins when they could of been chunins while Naruto,Sasuke, and Sakura was seperated for three years and now when they got back they were all strong but I have one question Why don't you let us know your going to a different place in the story when you wrote in a few of them it took me a second to realize that you switched from one scene to another in the same sentence which was confusing but I got over that ordeal. Love how Naruto and Hinata got together after three years of being a dense person he is finally got Sasuke to tell him she likes him then all goes from there. I never heard of the Tea country,Idate for that matter either. I guess I need to take some time and money and get the manga but where could I get it. E-mail if you ever want to talk to me and I would be glad to know more from you
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, thanks for fixing the missing chapters, i really love this fic, thank you so much!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's going on with this fic? Chapters 11, 12, 13 and 14 are missing. I really enjoyed this fic unlike anything, but to suddenly find those chapters missing when it was getting good? Shit... i hope this will be fixed soon.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I have been meaning to review you but never got the chance anyway I really like your story and want no need you to update soon. You leave us to wait for Naruto and Hinata's wedding so please, please update. Thanx.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story i loved the way you got everyones personalities the way they interact is perfect good job i hope to see more soon. oh yeah sry about your loss good luck with your mom. keep up the writing and i'll keep on reading.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeze 27 pages?!?! Oh yeah... I'm baaaack! Truth is i haven't spent much time reading fanfics...and now i'm glad i made time... cuz i missed this one desperately... well not desperately but nonetheless... Update soon!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As expected, another fantastic chapter!!!
Really sorry for your loss. I lost my father a while ago, so I have an idea what you're feeling. If you ever need to talk, e-mail me.
Can't wait for next chapter!
Really sorry for your loss. I lost my father a while ago, so I have an idea what you're feeling. If you ever need to talk, e-mail me.
Can't wait for next chapter!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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