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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Looks like Sasuke still has a lot of problems accepting that Naruto and Sakura have other important people in their lives. Does he still hold a grudge towards Hinata for the tea country events?
PS: Mediaminer is the worst site I've ever seen regarding readers response.
PS: Mediaminer is the worst site I've ever seen regarding readers response.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have been reading this story from the beginning, but only today have i had the actual time on my hands to review it. kickass, my friend, kickass. i am indeed interested to see where this is going, and if you want me to beta parts of this fic for you, just let me know by answering the review, or sending out a call for me on the Beta Reader Yahoo Group.
IMHO, you've captured all of the character's personalities perfectly. i look forward to seeing what goes down with the gift of "the house that gaara built" out of a sand jutsu. *smiles* or am i reading too much into the kazekage's statements?
well, i wish you the best of luck, and pleanty of time to update this fic frequently
*wolfish grin*
IMHO, you've captured all of the character's personalities perfectly. i look forward to seeing what goes down with the gift of "the house that gaara built" out of a sand jutsu. *smiles* or am i reading too much into the kazekage's statements?
well, i wish you the best of luck, and pleanty of time to update this fic frequently
*wolfish grin*
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE!
THAT IS WHAT THIS FIC IS!
^_^
Sasuke-chan needs a boy-*coughcough*-Girlfriend!
I feels bad for him! @_@
I love this FIC!
Please update soon!
Always loyal-
Sakura
THAT IS WHAT THIS FIC IS!
^_^
Sasuke-chan needs a boy-*coughcough*-Girlfriend!
I feels bad for him! @_@
I love this FIC!
Please update soon!
Always loyal-
Sakura
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I truly enjoyed this story from the beginning to the end. I think your forte is character developement. You explore new sides of them quite well, and it shows in the dialogues you write.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT UPDATE YES!!!! *bows alot* SHIZA!!!!!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Great job, as always.
Sakura's going to be well-defended on her way back to Konoha? More like absolutely-defended. (Ya know, Gaara and the whole Absolute Defense thingy)
I also loved how Naruto couldn't just use his front door. I seem to be remembering someone else who doesn't like using the door to that house... has Naruto picked up some of Kakashi's habits?!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sakura's going to be well-defended on her way back to Konoha? More like absolutely-defended. (Ya know, Gaara and the whole Absolute Defense thingy)
I also loved how Naruto couldn't just use his front door. I seem to be remembering someone else who doesn't like using the door to that house... has Naruto picked up some of Kakashi's habits?!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know i read it again.... this time ALL of it from start to where you left off. Keep it up!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW, what does the -shishou honorific mean?
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god dude i wasted alot of time reading your fic and in the end it was worth it i managed to finish it all in like a fwe hours and it got me entertained and i liked it cant wait for update WOOT ROCK ON DUDE!!!!!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to let you know i read it yet again.