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for Shattered

by caro8

person Washi
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter ^_^ I'm kinda pleased with the way the fight went - Naruto didn't attack with any of Kyuubi's Chakra, Sasuke was objiously pretty hardcore and could have killed Naruto if it wern't for the fact he didn't want to... Kudos on the way the fight played out, and since Sasuke won the last one it's only fair the score is evened somewhat ^_^. And Kudos on the story as a whole so far - it's been an interesting read, and I'm enjoying the way Team 7 play off each other throughout. And a special thanks for Sakura.

I can't wait for the next chapter(s?)!
person Yami Jay
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto-baka!!!! You got Sasuke worried! *cough* I have the feeling that's not the last time we see Kabuto in this story.
person Monkey Lady
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I'm to chapter 3 so far and really enjoying this fic. If you need a beta I would be happy to do that for you. :) Okay, I'm going to keep reading in hopes that there will be a little romance too. :)
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. But did you really have to end it at that cliff hanger? Man that has to be one of the worst I have come across. But I so love this story. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
person black
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The fight was actually easy to follow and rather nicely done. What got annoying was when everyone started to just..Pop out of no where. It was a kind of ..DUh..That KAkashi, Tsunade would be there but the way they showed up..WAs..Um..Iono..Awkward.
person Yami Jay
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why not a draw between the two? Anyway... Why do I have the nagging felling that Kabuto is about to do something nasty....
person black
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sound fight. Boring. Meh. Sasuke's fight. Sucked. You'd think Kiba would improve in skill and not use same stupid tactics from years ago. Its like what the hell, that was almost pointless.
person akuma_river
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person eyes0nme19
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so good...and has great action. Keep it up!!
person Mistress Pluto
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! So good! You and your evil cliffhangers. I can't wait for the next chapter. *taps fingers anxiously* I need to know where this is going and how it will end. *falls into pit of despair*