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by caro8

person Yami Jay
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, Hinata managed to calm Naruto and it's good. But will it be enough?
person Yami Jay
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glares at Kabuto* Baka... He had to do this did he? This won't be pretty if they meet in a match.
person YamiJay
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not dead yet, but love the new chapter ^^ Wanna read more.

BTW, I think Kiba went a little too far. He shouldn't be such a jerk with Sasuke 'cause he don,t know all the facts.
person someone
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, continue
person YamiJay
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies of laughters* True! But where would be the fun if they didn't have normal sensei. Good chapter!
person YamiJay
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wo! I think that Sasuke and Naruto needs to talk a lot and alone. Good chapter.
person akuma_river
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
coolsa.
person Yum
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah another chapter!!!
So he had a Psychological punishment... not that bad...
Lee, Lee, Lee... I can't wait to read the next chapter!! I like Lee spirit but he really need a change in his style of close and his hair cut... It's really lame!!! Will you change something about that?

Your mission if you accept it, is to update as soon as possible. As always if you are sick or got insomnie because of overwork on this project, I would denie all responsibilities! Good luck Caro...
this review will destroy itself in 5...4...3...2...1 poof
(sorry, I think I watch too much the old serie on TV ^^)
person YamiJay
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really want to read more of this story.
person Yum
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally you choose Saku/Lee... Very good choise... I don't know why but I like this pairing...
I really like the way Naruto acts mature but not too much!!
I'm really curious of the villager's reaction about Sasuke raturn, especially the other rookies one! will Sasuke be punish for runnig away from the village?
so please update soo!! :D