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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I am a bit curious.
You have a M/F warning on your summery - meaning Male / Female pairing.
And so far, I haven't seen any. Okay, so Lee and Sakura is together, however the story seem to concentrate on team 7. Not Lee ..
If this is another M/M action you might want to warn people.. I don't like reading those, simply because Male doing Male sexually/intimatly doesn't do anything for me.
I'll continue reading though, unless you put up that warning.
CeeCee
You have a M/F warning on your summery - meaning Male / Female pairing.
And so far, I haven't seen any. Okay, so Lee and Sakura is together, however the story seem to concentrate on team 7. Not Lee ..
If this is another M/M action you might want to warn people.. I don't like reading those, simply because Male doing Male sexually/intimatly doesn't do anything for me.
I'll continue reading though, unless you put up that warning.
CeeCee
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say, you have done a lot better on an den detail than most. I don't understand why so many authors have trouble making action scenes comprehendable to readers. So, good job :) *thumbs up* I understood yours
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I hope that this is going to be a SasuNaru NaruSasu fic. Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No.. I won't kill you because you like Sakura... It's not like it's some kind of disease... actually I don't hate her that much I dislike her when she's on Sasuke-kun's fan's mode... she seems to lost all her brain control!!!
I have a bad time for read your story... It wouldn't let me read the third chapter in FF.net so... Thank that you update here too!!!
It was... Awesome... Sasuke Return... and now will we have some kind of explanation about his 'new way'?
He finaly stop chasing his brother shadow... like it say 'It's never too late'!!^^
Hope you update soon!!
I have a bad time for read your story... It wouldn't let me read the third chapter in FF.net so... Thank that you update here too!!!
It was... Awesome... Sasuke Return... and now will we have some kind of explanation about his 'new way'?
He finaly stop chasing his brother shadow... like it say 'It's never too late'!!^^
Hope you update soon!!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story u should keep continuing
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not too shabby. Read somewhat like an rp but not bad all the same. Looking forward to more.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi re-me!!! Yeah Sasuke had return!! I'm super happy!!!^^ (no I'm not really a Sasuke fan... I'm an Itachi and Naruto fan...)
So last time you say you've not decided pairing, personaly I don't like pairing involving Sakura because... I kind dislike her... a lot!
This chapter was interesting!!!
Continue!! Up date sooooooooooooooooooooon
Ps : I saw you update in ff.net too... GREAT!!! I don't review there because I'm too lazy...
So last time you say you've not decided pairing, personaly I don't like pairing involving Sakura because... I kind dislike her... a lot!
This chapter was interesting!!!
Continue!! Up date sooooooooooooooooooooon
Ps : I saw you update in ff.net too... GREAT!!! I don't review there because I'm too lazy...
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm french, so sorry for my english!
I just wanted to say that your story is cool! And I didn't see a review from a sasuxsaku fan! I'm one of them... So I hope it's about that couple!!!
Anyway, go on!
Ja, bye bye!
I just wanted to say that your story is cool! And I didn't see a review from a sasuxsaku fan! I'm one of them... So I hope it's about that couple!!!
Anyway, go on!
Ja, bye bye!
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very evil more pls
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*mumbles about cliffhangers and kicks rocks impatiently as he waits for the next chap*