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for In The Moonlight

by veesempai

person Alyssa
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was so well done. And a very rare pairing indeed. It's not as if it's not possible. Hinata is a Capricorn and I believe Shikamaru is a Scorpio. Both fit perfectly. There desperately needs to be more originality around here.
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice fic. unlikely pairing, but you made it work. i like that hinata was a bit of the aggressor, since we know that shikamaru is soo laid back

thanks for sharing your story
person InternetLol
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"She really made him stupid... what a pain in the ass."

That's pure Shikamaru. Genius.

Unusual pairing, unusual situation, well done, you are victor.
person starlite
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!
person mariam
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a pairing I had never considered before. I really loved your inturpretation of Shikamaru. You've got it down. ^_^