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person soft as hours
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Very* nice! ^_^ I don't see why the author wants to remain anonymous, but I guess there are reasons :) I love the detail of the writing - the environment, Naruto and Sasuke's expressions and inner thoughts, plus the dialogue is amusing and endearing! Would love to mor more!
person Emina
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
:claps:
That was truly enjoyable.
I was laughing so much I nearly fell out my chair!
It was pointless, yes, but very fun too read.
Especially with Naruto's dirty mouth...
Too funny.

Anyways, Many *kudos to you ^_^

-Emina
[*Kudos= Props]