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by TenshiKaitou

person Quirk
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cracked up! Thank you for making me laugh!
person T.K-kun
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha!!! "want to go a second time?" that was my favorite line! nice humorous story. =)
person Random gurl
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv it. Kishimoto-sensei should draw it. And there should be an actual smut fic. XD Write more soon!
person lela951
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well what can i say.....i have been reading many many many fanfics throughout the last month. This is the FIRST review i bother to write. I found ur story funny because i could relate to an extent...lol no not that way :). Keep on with the story it might go some where if u expand the plot.
person Bealmira
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* That was awesome.
person campurr
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story a few times,so I am making sure I left a reveiw.This peice is very amusing and witty one of the top 20 storys I love.It would be great if this sence of humour was used in another story,for instance,Temari and gaara find an entry about themselves as an incest entry,someone from the village,someone unexpected and they turn that persons life upside down acting around them that it is true ie;Garra turns to the person for"help" ashe has been abused for years,lots of detail and this appals and turns thr person on then they get there comeupance depending how innocent they are,or if not so innocent use jutsu to blow their mind or if one of the siblings like them sustitute the person in the story they wrote but make it happen in real life, how can they admitt it.? they would be stuck hen hen ,literally, unless they fess up.... or not. See you are inspirational stuff for humour/lust.
thanks,a fan
chris
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It`s hysterically funny!!!
person fufu
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omigod! that was sooooo funny! i loved the..."you wanna' go a second time?" i started cracking up-i'm sure that was your desired effect. lol! so funny! keep writing!
person Anku
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.................Holy.....

XD This is ridiculous!!!! I love it!!! And for some strange reason, it all seems quite real...XD As in, if seems like that could happen...(It never will, but hey.) I like it!! Short, funny, not drawn out...Quite humorous...I was beginning to laugh out loud, but my mom is in the same room as me...Therefor, she'd ask...^^; My demlima, you see, is clear...^^ But, you said you loved reviews. Ya got one!!!

And you did succeed with the humour. *p. *pats ya on the back* Shi shi shi shi shi!! (laughing..)
person hanne
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LUV U!!