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for Promises of Betrayal

by moonprincess90

person TenshiKaitou
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay...am I the first reviewer? Hm...that's cool! Anyway back to the fic, nice one (made Gai's good guy pose)! I especially like the first chappie. Otherwise, I think the sex scene in chappie 2 could be better (Or maybe I'm just one heck of a horny bastard, lol) You should continue and hurry update! Gambette.