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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Danm. If I smoked, I think I'd need a cigarette after reading that. It was well written and I enjoyed it muchly.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa!...That was so hawt! >_< You're a wonderful writer! <3
But I want to see what happens at dinner! And of course the part were they finally...'get together'!
Please wirte more soon! I can hardly wait! -squee- ^w^
But I want to see what happens at dinner! And of course the part were they finally...'get together'!
Please wirte more soon! I can hardly wait! -squee- ^w^
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O OH MY GODS! That was one of the hottest smut scenes I've ever read! How can that be your first one?! TELL ME! Oh lordy, I can't wait till the next chapter! Please work fast to finish it! I praise you. <3
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Update, uber uber uber soon!!!!!
Update, uber uber uber soon!!!!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ho, I remember this one from far back....and ho I love it so ^^ are you going to do more chapters?
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A very erotic and sexy Naruto plus a very turned on Sasuke, I'm very excited about this story, you must continue!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this was definately good!
write more, please?
write more, please?
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Multi chapter all the way! How embarrassing for Sasuke-kun! =) Your lemon was really good. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself! Yeah, update when you have time.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was great. Good fics have been so hard to find, lately. All the ones that I like are taking a while to update, and then this one pops up. Excellent writing, and I think you did VERY well with the "sex" scene, especially if it was only your first time writing one. Now I'm really eager for another chapter of this. I'll hope for one soon.
Love the way you write both Sasuke and Naruto, by the way. You've kept them both in character while still maturing them a bit for the time frame of the fic. Good work. *goes to add to reccomended fics*
Love the way you write both Sasuke and Naruto, by the way. You've kept them both in character while still maturing them a bit for the time frame of the fic. Good work. *goes to add to reccomended fics*