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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did an awesome job with the citrus-ness. Keep it up, you definatly have talent. ^^
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this aint a one shot right!? good. hehe. good story.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was AWESOME. I remember reading this on ffnet forever and a day ago, and waiting desperately for you to update it. The only spelling mistake I caught was Mapple instead of Maple. I don't catch alot of mistakes when I'm reading fanfic unless it's really bad.
I love your fic, so please update it this time rather then leave me hanging!
I love your fic, so please update it this time rather then leave me hanging!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u go girl! XD this story ROCKS!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good if thats one of ur first fics like that i congradulate u as much as i enjoyed ur story i cant write the stuff i get uber cheezy so i think ur pretty good please make this a multi chap fic i know ill read it but i also have an annoyin ahbit of not reviewing
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. ::uber nosebleed:: O_o That was SO hot!! xD
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please pleaaaaaaase make this into a multi chaptered story! Ah, this is such a good lemon *fans herself*
I can't believe this was your first one! Damn, I'm jealous. Well, I don't have much hope for a continuation, since you haven't updated this in a while... but it'd be soooo cool if you did! That last sentence... Damn again! That was perfect!
I can't believe this was your first one! Damn, I'm jealous. Well, I don't have much hope for a continuation, since you haven't updated this in a while... but it'd be soooo cool if you did! That last sentence... Damn again! That was perfect!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding!! This was greeeeaaaat!!!!! I loved it so much!! I want a sequel! Can I have a sequel? Please? It's just so good and now Naruto knows Sasuke did something (with someone? -his thoughts) and Sasuke's realized his attraction...
There has to be more!!! You've started an addiction, you can't let it END there!!!!
There has to be more!!! You've started an addiction, you can't let it END there!!!!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish you had continued this. You could have had Sasuke freaking out during the dinner, or having dreams, or any number of interesting things. Personally, I love the idea of seeing Sasuke squirm in fanfictions (probably because he always has such a stick up his arse in the manga, eh?) Alwell, this is a great one shot as it is (did you really NOT have a beta? I couldn't find a mistake if I tried...).
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...you never continued it! That's too bad, I thought you did a great job on this, I never would have guessed that you were a first time lemon-writter. Damn, I really would have liked to have seen how dinenr went, or at least found out what popped into Naruto's head after making that last observation. Alwell, if you ever get an idea of what happens next, would you pleeeeeeease try writting it? *puppy face*