rate_review Reviews

Best. Ending. Sentence. Ever. XD

It's very very well written and I liked it thoroughly. And the sex scene isn't bad at all. I totally forgot that you mentioned it was your first and just figured you were doing that thing a lot. But now I have to say it was extra good since you obviously said you'd never done that sort of thing...
Very very good story...

Okay, so that was soooo good! I liked it, and I hope that you don't intend on stopping here. I would love to see how Sasu handles eating with Naru with the images of what just happned going through his mind. Um maybe even some naru desert after dinner? Please continue

I think you should defintely coutunie this fic!! It's amazing! And it's funny too. Poor Sasuke, now he's utterly confused about how to handle his newly developed crush on Naruto... 'Course, we all know if Naruto found out, he'd just up and jump Sasuke's bones *snkrs* So yes, please write more, because this was excellent for a first try. And we all know Preactice makes perfect! ^^

Hey, I thought this was incrediably wonderful! You are a fabulous writer, and I think you did everything perfectly! Awesome description - just enough of it - before you eased into the erotica. It was very enjoyable and arousing and made my fangirly day. I love Naruto...it's an amazing series. You really did a good job with keeping everyone in character and explaining anyhting (like how Naruto had an advanced sense of smell and how he'd previously gotten over his crush on Sakura and realized his attraction to Sasuke) I loved it. I really hope you write more! You have a new fan!

EoA

i'd love to see this made into a mulit-part story!! the story itself was done well...practice does make perfect and i think you are well on your way! please write more! ja

hino

DUDE!!

you must seriouly
continue this wonderful
story of yours!!

it is well written and
i loved it!! so i wiil for
you to continue with
the story please!!

i am so happy

that was your first lemon 0o?.... wao! it was quit good for a first try...i love the way you describe things, so dond make the chapters longer or shorter, they are perfect ^^

whoa. That it?

Very nice. Loved Sasuke's reaction when he realized what he did. *snickers* And Naruto was just hot as always.... *drools* Will there be a 2nd chapter? Please? ^ ^