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This is the only IC fic out here.Can't you finish it please?We have been waiting soooooooo long!

Argh.I wish this were updated.Maybe now that your contest is over?Whine.Whimper.I shall return.

........I like it... are you going to continue it? please do so. It's great.

You are evil. Pure evil, to stop there. You have me firmly enraptured in this, and not in the least because the very sexy image of Sasuke going through this for his goal is something I can see so easily. I like how even Kenji has depth, and your writing style is exquisite. The characterizations are manipulated the least amount imaginable in order to get them to do what you want - just the way it should be. In short, I commend you, and it would be an absolute shame if you did not continue this. Overall, thank you for sharing this story with me, and I congradulate you on a job well done. ^_^

~Chel

Oh my God.....that was the hottest shit I've ever read. I didn't fucking sleep last night becasue that was so amazing. Honestly. I am not even attempting to flatter you or give a commonly polite review. That was seriously incrediable. I have never read smut that hot. The story is fantastic so far, the bit with the prostitute wasn't corny (like most OC) and I can't wait to see what happens with Itachi and Saske (and that old pervert Orochimaru). I always figured that long tongue would eventually come in handy. I am really very impressed, and very taken with this fic. I'm taking it with me to all of my classes today (snicker) and I will let my other yaoi fangirl friends know about this masterpiece thusfar. For the love of all that is holy...please update soon. My poor body and mind cannot take the suspense. Very well written, a fabulous idea...please, continue soon! You have a new crazed fan! *humps her leg*

-Eye of Aurora

Ooh...very very sexy. :3 Update soon please, I can't wait till Itachi and Sasuke fuck. *drool*

Gods, That's amazing... I can't wait for the next chapter, I really can't...
wow...

Again, your writing envelops me into a different world.
Its absolutely gorgeous, every word.
Tension builds so quickly, escalating into cold, calculating acts of passion. An oxymoron.
Magnificent writing--I cannot wait for the next chapter!!
~michi~

Wow... Just wow.

Your description is beautiful, your pacing great, your scenes nicely framed, and the *really hot sex* certainly doesn't hurt! The cast of characters you're working with (Sasuke, Itachi, Orochimaru) are some of the more often badly portrayed characters in the fandom. You've done a great job of avoiding the stereotypes and keeping them fascinatingly in-character. The OC is nicely handled, your Sasuke = mrrrow, and I really, really want to read more. (Hint hint)

So, in other words: thanks for making my night!

Whoa..oh nice,nice,nicenicenice.I can't wait for you to finish...so I didn"t.
Kudos,
Chris