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for Take My Pain Away

by CandyElly

schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this
person Breek
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
murrrr...*pouts* please write more, this is very interesting, and really good. I wanna see Sasu-asswhooping, please?
person Lunar84
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and it's a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long. You write beautifully and this story has a wonderful flow. It is one of the few well written Naruto fanfics I have come across. If you find the time I'm sure many people would be happy to see you continue this wonderful story.
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Even though you have a few spelling/grammar errors, I love how you made their relationship blossom. Doesn't seem finished, but since it's been 2 years since you've updated, I'm guessing this will be incomplete sadly. Would have been interesting to find out why Sasuke turned into Mr Rapist....
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love the playfulness too.
person Mel
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am totally loving this fic! I think Sakura/Kakashi is my favorite pairing. You have a well developed plot, excellent dialogue, and you still manage to keep the characters true to themselves. Great job! I can't wait til you update again.
person ChikaChika
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I usually never read Naruto fics, mainly 'cause I'm so busy with the real world I have no time to retreat to my quiet litte place just on the brink of insanity, but I love Sakura/Kakashi anything. I know it's not as popular but if it isn't Saku/Kaka then it's Saku/Kiba. I just think it's a really cute pairing! Anyway, enough cute stuff. For some reason my two unbeleivably idiotic brothers always monitor everything I read on this site. They say it's to make sure it's not too graphic, like it's any of their business, but I think they are just trying to get horny. Weird-ass freaks. So, on behalf of my brothers, when are Kakashi and Sakura going to fuck for real? (unbelievably blunt, I know, that's my brothers for ya)
person Sarah
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story chika. Keep it up.
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really good fic, but personally I think they should at least get to take Uchiha apart peice by peice. Don't particularly care for one character or another, I like them all, but that was too real. The fic was intense, it was great, but that was too much like what can happen. Uchiha should burn.

Great detail, amazing twists and suspense. If it was put in the real story line would prolly have close to mass killing-intent from the more...ethusiastic, fans.
person Kakashi's girl
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. I can't wait until you update. You are a fantastic writer. I loved the last chapter, it was so sad but great. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work.

^_^ Sayonara!