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for Take My Pain Away

by CandyElly

person Angela
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was kick ass i can't wait until i get to read the rest of the chapters you are writing. take care and keep up the stories.

^_^ the detail was really good
person SSJAndromeda
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That can't be the ending, right? RIGHT?! Please write another chapter! PLEASE! MY LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!... well not really, but it comes really close! lol.
person jen
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story plot. Staying true to the characters seems hard. Your doing a great job!!!
person sof
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god your stury us so good when are you going to write more!
person catc10
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! *bawling on the ground* Oh for the love of god update soon!! I can't stand leaving off on such an angsty note! That would be godaweful! This is such a great, perfect, beautifully done story oh for the love of god don't stop!!
ME
person Dementa
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O; Whoa... that was so sad! I think you are the only author that has ever made me feel sorry for Sakura. This is an awesome story! More than likely, as I said before, you're going to get flamed for this, the whole bastardizing Sasuke thing... I actually think that's something that he'd do after the whole curse seal thing... Very good and emotional. I can't wait for the next chapters.
person Fairia13 not signed in
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...let the blood bath begin! I hope Sasuke gets his balls handed to him (eventually). Either way, I think its great that you have a heterosexual story, it has a plot, and the grammer is excellent - my thanks to your betas! As for your comments about the south: while I have a tendency to disagree (Helllooo cowboys...!) I can see where you're coming from. What is it with the over-large belt buckles? Are they compensating for something? And why oh why must the drive trucks everywhere? I understand the practicality of owning one, but I don't understand why they feel compelled to pile a veritable mob into the sonic parking lot at 10:30pm and blare country as loud as they can while harassing anyone who owns a forgien car (like a honda or mitsubishi) or any guy who has an earring while they're wearing crotch-riding wrangler's or levi's and ten-gallon hats - complete with snakeskin boots and belt buckles roughly the size of a dinner plate.

Anyway, enough of my rambling. You have an excellent story and I'm so happy you finally decided to update!
person Dementa
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Sasuke is going to rape Sakura? Something tells me people are ging to flame the Hell out of you... but, hey, you warned them. Not your fault if they can't click a back-button. I, on the other hand like this story. It's very well-written and thought out. It should be continued. I can't wait to see more.
person Atropa
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, such a sweet story. I have just recently begun to read Naruto-fics and this was one of the best yet...
I hope you'll update soon.
person :\'(
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? Pleeeaaassseee...