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for Take My Pain Away

by CandyElly

schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps Elly*

I loved it! I actually read all of it at one go! And now my body requires that I scrounge up much needed food. ^_^;

But yeah, I can't wait for the next chapter. And what exactly is Sasuke-bastard planning to do? And now I have visions of Kakashi and Sakura getting married in my head. Which would be your doing I might add, that and I'm tempted to finish off the last of the home-made wine. *drools* Good stuff that is, but I'm not much of a day drinker... makes me queasy... weird. ^ ^;

Post again soon please!
person jesslikewhoa
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“It’s been so long I can’t even remember clearly,” he laughed, “I suppose it had something to do with me being so young at my level. I graduated early. I was taken more seriously if people couldn’t see that I was actually still a kid.”

that wonderfully sums up the reason for the mask. i couldnt have said it any better myself (though it wasnt revealed in kakashi gaiden, that sounds like a very logical reason to me.)

please update :)
person Masami
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off.. I love this fanfic so much! So hot, steamy and sexy >:D!! Also, I find it so funny that you are the same Elly from the cosp.com boards! I'm the girl that is doing Hyuuga Hinata with the contacts! ^^ hehe I did a search for yummy Kaku/Saka fanfics, and I find yours! Please keep writing.. I LOVEEE yummy Naruto fanfic, and I hope you do another story! ^^ See you at Katsucon!
person Shadow
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWII!!!!!!!!! *glomps printed copy thats going in her backpack*
You should sue for ownership of Naruto........
You did a great job! Kept them in character and everything!! *poke with stick* So will there be sequal? ....*partial threat* I do have a pointy stick......
*flees from Kakashi and Inner Sakura as they come after her for threating the nice authoress*AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
person ehu
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading your story...during work no less! thats how good i think your story is. keep up the good work! i love the plot and how they seem to just tease the very edges of the intimacy that is between them. can't wait for the update!
person blisblop
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done,dark w/sasbasrard.You have me hooked.I can't wait...thanks
person Alexis
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW That was hot!! what a turn on! Your story is great..I love it!
person Chelsey
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Please keep updating it as much as you can and I'll keep reading it. Update soon. Hey check out my story it's called Rose of Uchiha. I'll be updating it soon hopefully.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Fairia13
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was soo nice to come back off of leave and see a new chapter to your story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Lyraelin
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS! It's 2:45 AM and I have to get up early tomorrow but I could NOT tear myself away from this fic! I worship you. *Bows repeatedly*