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person hercat
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quite the epic. I really enjoyed reading this, and hope you keep writing.
person Desert-Lifeblood
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I think that your story was well thought out, well planed, and well writen. I liked the way you portrayed Sasuke and his change of attitude and the way you discribed Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. It's wasn't one of those storys that unnssesarally tourture the characthers but it had a heathy dose of angst. I only have one qusetion. What's gonna happen next? like...Sasukes immortal but Narutos not, so...? Or does haveing a demon in him make him Immortal? 'Cause that would be cool to. or will Sasuke turn him into a Vampire as well? you HAve to write a sequal! please? *puppy dog eyes* Anyways, loved this story and loved Reflections to. Keep writing, your great!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kk, I know that I already reviewed, but...I just wanted to let you know how kewl your last "chapter" that explained vampire "stuff" was. Very neat/interesting...and great for future reference when my idiot kid brother is pretending to be one of the un-dead... ^___^ I can tell that you have done alot of research...either that, or you -are- a vampire, at which time you are still well-read! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was absolutely extraordinary......completely amazing!!!! Yay!!! I loved it!!! Very original/clever idea, and oh-so-wonderfully written!!! I loved the character descriptions and the details that you put into this -- way to go!!! I can't wait to read your next fic............ ^____^ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
person sazuna-teme!?
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats was such a good story i just love it so much! but i did have a problem with it though... why didnt the fight with Itachi last longer?! i was practically waiting, reading tentively for that fight to come, only to fight it ending in less then a few paragraphs.. you couldve portrayed Itachi's emotions alot more and have a bit about him discovering about Sasuke... but aside from that i luved the story to bits!! i wish i could see a picture of what Sasuke looks like as a vampire though... lol!

n e way your my new favourite author so keep up the good work as i will be expecting alot of great things from you!!

bye for now
~~sazuna~> o.0!!?~~

P.S do you think you could write a fic about Uchiha incest? i just luv the brothers so much thats their my fave pairing!! ^^;;
person RavenWings
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. You know, I didn't think it was possible to do a good vampire fic for Naruto... did you two ever prove *me* wrong! Hee, great work. Oh, and I *have* heard of vampires having telepathy and empathy before, but the other psychic powers were a new one. ^^ Thanks for making it interesting! It gets a *tiny* bit boring when all the vampires are the same...