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person Tokitoh
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing my ass off. Then I was drooling all over the place. Then I was drooling and laughing again... my ass and stuff and, uh, really, this is the best Naruto fanfic I've seen so far. Really. Great job. So cool. You rock. XD
person Vicki
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"He already swore fealty to me last night after our shower, so... yeah, let's move this ahead a bit."

Best line ever. Gosh, it is so sweet. (Not to mention extremely hot) Aww, I kinda do feel sorry for the schreeching fan girls. (Not really though, because I get hot gay porn in return)
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! so sweet :) i'm flooded with euphoria, especially from the parts where sasuke confessed and declared his loyalty to naruto! cheers and write more of these fluffy and heart-warming fics :D
person Demon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH I LOVE THIS FIC YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE I AM ADDICTED TO YOUR WORK!!!!!
person wolfsbane loner
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ wai~!!! kawaii! im a sasuke-uke fan, and you don't tend to see narusasu around, mostly sasunaru. ^^ this story is just so kawaii!
person jai
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! It's one of my favourite Naruto fics ever! It's so cute without being overly fluffy. Just perfect!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! *is laughing her butt off* That was GREAT!!! I loved it!!! ^___~ Absolutely wonderful -- clever, creative, funny, sexy, well written, and a great ending -- way to go!!! Keep up the good work!!!
person sazuna-teme!?
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv the story.. but why does Sasuke have to be the slightly submissive one?

n e way keep up the great work! and try making some Uchihacest while your at it..lol^^;

dakara kuso sayonara nanda!
~~sazuna~> o0!!?~~
person MiyaJadecube
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love rainy days...a time to spend reading truly well-written fanfiction. *bows* I loved how you incorporated the original Naruto storyline with some great PWP (not meant as an insult!), your characterization was well done, and I couldn't help but laugh at the end line. Not too sappy, another point for you! I know this review isn't exactly 'helpful' in better writting techniques or somesuch, however I just wanted to send a little note to keep your spirits up. Your good writers, worthy of any SasuNaru story. Humble gratitude for making my afternoon! ^_^

Happy (belated) Holidays ~ You all get pocky!! *grins*
person campurr
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have not smiled so sappily nor felt such a silly swelling in my chest [compleat with urge to cheer] since I first saw the ending of *Star Wars *.Jeesh...gawd I have got to go to sleep,this level of feel good is really not me [so far]
Well done , another quick [and raunchy...yeah] "hit"
chris