AFF Fiction Portal
person heather
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story... and finally something that doesn't end in a cliff hanger, and has a happy ending! I love the way you write... you portray the characters very similarly to the actual anime instead of making them seem to mushy or whatever. Keep writing great stories!!
person chronicpervert
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot and cute as always! <333333333
person Tokitoh
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so adorable and romantic. I think I'm gonna cry. Oh damn, I am crying... please stop me. Someone. o____o
*runs away sobbing*
person Potemkin
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah. i actually had the patience to read through the whole story to get to the lemon...which says quite a bit (given what a smut slut i am), about your skill. Yummies. :) And Naruto is absolutely himself. Everyone really.
person blisblop
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi.I am not sure if I have reveiwed this before.Its very hot and I was happy to read about their love.One thing,guys and new lovers do NOT wear underwear to bed!Why would you keep meantioning that they are keeping their genetles covered?It reads weird and is very..well, unrealistic in the extreme, for one, and very anal(excuse the term )for another...is this an underwear fetish thing?Come to think of it you do mention at least twice what colour and fabric Sasuke's are made of,then there is the whole hand job(neat idea)thing with ripped silk underwear...still they would Not wear them to bed.They are not catholic school girls or eight year old boys.Guys are just not that modest,it would be very pathetic (esp.for new lovers,any combination of sexes),in fact it would be an insult to wear underwear to bed in this situation.This seems to be a fetishy thing however and the getting them ripped off part is big fun(,wearing them to sleep is just fucked up).I don't know why I am being so vehement about this....it just ruins the flow,the reality I guess,its way too virgin girly. I hope you are not insulted,I mean this as constructive.Yes I do.Thank you for a wonderful fic.
person teaspoon
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawwwww.....so kawaii!!! Very clever -- I really enjoyed it!!! Keep up the good work!!!
person Bealmira
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is... HOLY SHIT. Thank you! *hugs*
person danna~Chan
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THAT WAS SO CUTE!!!! I LOVED IT!!!
person dAni3Lr
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
am always looking out for ur stories all the time ^^ love it so much ^^ keep it up!! I kept reading "Of Sacrifices and Love" too!! That story totally rocks!! Beautiful story!! wooT!