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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person Anon
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter!
person Gwyllion
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! i'm so glad to see an update from you! It's been so long.....Poor Naruto....I totally forgot how much turmoil he is in now. Hope both him and ino will resolve their differences and get together with Sasuke. I seriously LOVE this fic.

Glad to hear that you are continuing this fic. And am sorry to know that you went through so many problems. Hope all's well with you now. :D
person Me
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Minato Namikaze is the Fourth Hokages name. He is also known as The Yellow Flash. His wife was Kushina Uzumaki.
person Mort
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story-
I just hope Ino doesn't do anything foolish-
You've really opened her up and made her an amazing character that I never considered-
person Dynamo
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really great story, I'm interested to see if naruto and ino are still friends after all this happens, hope you update soon!
person ringpop
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DON'T LIKE SAKURA EITHERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!......but also in my story I'm being nice to her.......but not in my newest one BUAAAAAAAAAHHAHAHHAHAHHAAAAA!!!! great story by the way : )
person Damp
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Girl, it's about DAMN time you've written anything!! You had me worried that you had given up on this fic and you weren't going to return to it...scared me shitless.

-Damp *Is it possible for you to update just a little bit faster then when you updated this???*
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was such a good chapter...i liked the conversation that Iruka had with Naruto, it's gonna suck for Sasuke when Ino attacks him. I liked the chakra beads that was a really cool idea. Even if it was a long it was so worth it, i'll keep my eye out for the update! Can't wait!! Keep it up!!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Quite the love triangle and whats with the headaches??? And the fourth's floor?? And whats in the box??? So many questions!!!

In all seriousness, this is a fantastic story. It is very well written, engaging, and completely believable. None of the characters seem out of character and their interactions and dialogue really flow. I can't wait until the next chapter (even if it is a month away.) ^^ Keep up the good work.
person Gwyllion
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! A new chappie!

Oh noes!! It's over so soon.....D:

Absolutely swept me up in suspense. Poor Naruto...I hope things would clear up for him soon. And Ino better not hurt Sasuke....Keep up witht he great work. Am looking forward in reading more! :D