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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why do u have to make it a yaoi why why!!!! LOL
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... You have a really nice story going on here... However, I noticed a few grammatical errors... I can't pinpoint them without sounding like a really stuck up professor so I'll just tell you that I noticed them so that yu can review your work and edit... Oh and I'm pretty sure that what the ninjas do are 'jutsus' and not 'jitsus'... But I do like the story... Well, what I've read so far... I'll review again once I'm finished reading all the available chapters... :D
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to know when is the next one coming out???
it's really good and i just start is today and finish all 13...
so good luck writhing and please finish 14 soon
MeMe
it's really good and i just start is today and finish all 13...
so good luck writhing and please finish 14 soon
MeMe
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is getting hot! I must admit that I wasn't expcting it to be good, but there you go proving me wrong! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hetro...oh babe please this story is way to hot for hetro
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glee!*
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update! its been so long, i had to reread the entire thing- but it was worth it! i really like this story so far, great job!
ps: WHAT is with that chest???
ps: WHAT is with that chest???
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh how i would love to see an update, ya know a new chapter so we can break up with Ino and move on to the good stuff with sasuke and naruto, yes it will undoubtably be sad when ino gets dumped but sakura can pick up the peices and nauto can get invoved with my favorite character sasuke!yeah update update!!!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've heard that the Fourth's name was Arashi, and that he's Naruto's dad. They do look a lot alike. *^^* Anyways, great story. Off to read part 12 now!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! This is the bit where the dramatic mysterious piano music comes in, isn't it? You know, before Dracula rises from his coffin, or before Frankenstein's monster is sent up into the lightning storm to be given life! I bet that was the Fourth's room or something, right? Anyways, update as soon as possible!