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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So if it isn't the Kyuubi then what is causing these headaches? It ain't a tumor is it, cause wouldn't Neji be able to see it. I mean Charaka is the energy of the body, so wouldn't it divert the flows in some way?
hmm. Keep up the good work. coolsa.
hmm. Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ino interrupted something *snickers*
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was interesting. It looks like we're getting closer to what's really bothering Naruto, and the SasuNaru hints are starting to grow.
Please update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to Ino's conversation with Tsunade.
Please update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to Ino's conversation with Tsunade.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! It's awesome so far! I hope you keep it up.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, I just remembered something! I forgot to mention this before, so I'll say it now. (Not that I think you'll mind getting another review, eh? ~.^) Okay, ahem. NEways... You have been using the honorifics the wrong way. -Sama goes with someone older than you that demands respect, -San is used politely with acquaintances and friends, -Kun is used by girls talking to guys, and -Chan is used between girls, really close friends, or if you're talking to someone younger than you, like a little kid. Oh, and let's not forget the no honorific, that's only used by really, really close friends, lovers, girlfriend-boyfriend, that kind of thing.
No disrespect is intended, of course, because by now I'm practically worshipping the ground you walk on for writing this great story! (I sound all stalker-y, don't I? Heh, didn't mean to! ^-^") NEways, this is really long, so LATERS! Oh, and update SOON!!
No disrespect is intended, of course, because by now I'm practically worshipping the ground you walk on for writing this great story! (I sound all stalker-y, don't I? Heh, didn't mean to! ^-^") NEways, this is really long, so LATERS! Oh, and update SOON!!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im really starting to like the story,plz continue.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah progress between Saske and Naruto. I like Ino though so it will be sad if she gets hurt... but ur the writer! So on with the story what are these headaches and when will Saske and Naruto wake up and realize they are digging each other?!?!?!?! Please don't leave me hanging update pretty please.. with cherries and all that ....:)
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intresting aspecton the relationship and im curious to see what you do with the whole headache aspect goes. But i do like the idea of the naruto/ino aspect finally give him some who cares for him and woulde give him every thing wheter it be her or Hinita by why i just wanna ask is the obsession with the whole naru/sasuke thing. I mean as rivals they r great but.. any way love your story and cant wait to see how it comes out.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hinata, Sasuke, and Neji-sama. ;-; Heh, seems like Neji-sama has a bit of a crush too eh? ^^ I love NejiNaru, so is there a chance you can write a NejiNaru fanfic?
Oh, and I'd love an Alternate Ending for InoNaru. Truth be told, I've never read the pairing and yours is my first but it sounds really interesting and you're an excellent writer.
Oh, and I'd love an Alternate Ending for InoNaru. Truth be told, I've never read the pairing and yours is my first but it sounds really interesting and you're an excellent writer.
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is AWESOME! I fell so bad for Ino though. I think she and Naruto would make a nice couple, at least with the way you've been writing this fic. So....ummm, yeah....do you think you COULD do an alternate timeline setting for them? PLEASE!
Great story, keep updating! :D
Great story, keep updating! :D