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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person jai
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, great to see an update! It's interesting.. damn, you made me like NaruIno, and I was kinda hoping he reciprocated her feelings.. but Naruto's his own person. I look forward to seeing where you take this fic.
person Arashi Lyrae
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o... wow... I start to read your story some time ago... o.o and... I really love it X3... even if I'm a fan of Sasunaru... you make fan of the Ino/Naruto friendship *.*... n_n lol please write more... I can't wait for next chapter...

PD: sorry if my english is really bad XP, english is my second language
person Maiden
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pairing, I was suprised that someone can write about Ino and Naruto... But I hope this fic wont turn into SasuNaru. I, to be honest, hate SasuNaru, theres just too much of them. So please, dont turn this into one... And update quickly
person Natsu
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! ^_^
Awww.....I really actually kinda like the Ino/Naruto part of this. =D OBviously routing for SasuNaru. ^_-
Really well written, I wanna read more! ^-^
person Sukara
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waii!!!!!!! Kawaii!!! =^_^= I think Naruto and Ino should go out for awhile, while Sasuke-kun trys to get involved and trys to break them up ^^ Or atleats keep Naru-kun and Ino-chan friends~Nyii? ^///^
person jazzy
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's getting pretty excellent. Please get well.
person Rachel Dracon
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that really interesting. I usually only go for yaoi, but I'm enjoying that Ino/Naruto thing very much. And since you said it will be Sasuke/Naruto later on I can't wait to find out how that's going to happen either. Great story, please update it soon!
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooo
not ino kissing
please stop the horror
update soon
person Hitomi
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 6)
I hope you get hit by a giant rubber duckie!!! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Why a cliffhanger?!?!
Grrrrrr... will we have to wait for months again? Please, don't!

Great chapter!! Wonderful! Fan-fucking-tastic!
I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto to get togezer!^^
Is Ino [or Can Ino] be with Shikamaru? They soooo belong together!


Can't wait for the next chapter,
Until then,
Ja ne~
person jai
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*g* You know, I started reading this at first because I'm a huge sasunaru fan... but now with this latest chapter, you're actually getting me to like NaruIno! lol! And well, I don't mind it one bit! I realize you'll probably shift it to sasunaru later on, but wow, I'm just amazed at how you got me to like the NaruIno too. ANd damn, I REALLY like the way you've characterized Ino. She so rocks.