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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just hope that sasuke didnt see that last part... ^^
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it!love it! it is so cute!!! cn
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u did really good on this one!!!! prbly my favorite one yet.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Squee!! Ino and Naruto kissed! Awesome! So, okay, well if this isn't going to be an Ino/Naruto story, could you write a fic with the two of them sometime. (alternate timelines confuse me in fics) But, there will be a lemon between the two in this one... *puppy eyes*
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, cousin Dementa was right! (she usually recommends fics for me to read so I can tell the good fics from crap-fics) This is definantly A-1 material. Tis teh awesomeness! I can't wait for some sort of Ino/Naruto action and I would love to see and Ino/Naruto from you in the near future. (NaruSasu are getting a little too common if you ask me)
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering how this goes from Inonaru to sasunaru? try not to hurt Ino too much after this fic and all she has done for Nartuto that would be cruel.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WhoHo!!! Way to go Ino! hehe I am still rooting for Naruto/Ino. Waaaaaaaaaay too many Sas/Nar out there. I don't have anything against m/m pairings..it's the repeat coupling that I see everywhere thats annoying. SO far this is the only Ino/Naru out there, that makes it orginal.
The past chapters have set it up so there is an actual build up for feelings between the two.
The past chapters have set it up so there is an actual build up for feelings between the two.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I just wish you would keep it as InoNaru pairing! Way too many SasuNaru stories all over the place.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*on recovery*
gah! I just had a heart attack on your latest chapter! damn! although I love SasuNaru and this fic IS a SasuNaru, I don't, in any way, mind the NaruIno pairing.
Being a loyal SasuNaruSasu fan it's scary that I'm beginning to see NaruIno in a different light and that's your fault! ^^;;;
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gah! I just had a heart attack on your latest chapter! damn! although I love SasuNaru and this fic IS a SasuNaru, I don't, in any way, mind the NaruIno pairing.
Being a loyal SasuNaruSasu fan it's scary that I'm beginning to see NaruIno in a different light and that's your fault! ^^;;;
Happy Valentines! ^__________________^
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I really like this story. The character development is superb and you make everyone sound so .. human. And you write so well too!
At first I didn't think I was going to be interested in this story, cause I'm a big massive SasuNaru fan .. but when I read the first chapter, I realised that your portrayal of Ino makes her really likeable and interesting. In fact I'd love if those two get it on for a bit before you move the story onto your intended pairing (cause you're right, a jealous Sasuke is very sexy indeed). My only gripe is that some of your chapters are too short! But seriously, please do update soon.
The scene with Ino and Kyuubi was a really nice touch! Kyuubi you wily ole' fox you :D
At first I didn't think I was going to be interested in this story, cause I'm a big massive SasuNaru fan .. but when I read the first chapter, I realised that your portrayal of Ino makes her really likeable and interesting. In fact I'd love if those two get it on for a bit before you move the story onto your intended pairing (cause you're right, a jealous Sasuke is very sexy indeed). My only gripe is that some of your chapters are too short! But seriously, please do update soon.
The scene with Ino and Kyuubi was a really nice touch! Kyuubi you wily ole' fox you :D