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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person Anon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Poor poor Ino. She is usually villianized and bashed but your version of her character is quite likable. I hope her heart isn't broken when Sasuke and Naruto realize their love for each other. Find her another bishie. Shikamaru is perfect.

Update as soon as you can! I hope you feel better.
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o

whoa...... i never thought that i would be saying this but "you go girl!" please note i'm talking about how she told her mom off. not about how she kissed naruto. *shudders* but i just cant wait to see the shit hit fan when sasuke finds out!
person akuma_river
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, the fan has been hit. Great story. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person fanfiction
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I like it so far. Heh, I'm not much of a fan of sasunaru but this fic is so well write! I'm now a fan of InoNaru pairing. Can't wait for the next update. :)
person Monmon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooo!!!! Cliffhanger!!!!
*sobz*
oh well... i think i'll live... can't wait for your next chapter! =)
person animegirl
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMIGOD you can't just leave it at that, what the hell! i'm gona go nuts, you've got to update now, i need to know what happens. this isn't fair, you'r evil, leaving us hanging like this. this has gotten complicated now, even though ino said she loves naruto i hope you make it into a brotherly love so she won't get really upset when naruto and sasuke get together * and they'd getter get together soon or i'm gona freak! i'm a big sucker for sasuke/naruto parings* i really like the fact that ino and naruto have become good friends, christ i wanna no what happens, YOU MUST UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person clowangel
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! O_O; Isn't that a bit fast? For Ino to fall in love that is. I expected it to be a little slower... But whatever. The chapter was good anyways. I just wish there were some SasuNaru moments. And I never expected Sasuke to get THAT angry. XD Was funny to read him destroying his furniture though. Hahaha That was hilarious. But poor Sasuke. He must be feeling pretty down in the dumps. =(
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...that's so cute-why are you planning to progress into SasuNaru?! UNACCEPTABLE!! There are enough SasuNaru fics out there as it is, stay with the NaruIno!! *Defends Naruto and Ino from Sasuke's lustful ways in a classic lion tamer get-up* BACK! *whipcreak* BACK I SAY!

Update soon and please keep it NaruIno! I don't how long I can hold Sasuke back!! *threatens Evil Sasuke with my wooden chair!*
person macy
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
howaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! i'm surprised actually. i didn't expect Ino to fall in love!! Hooo~~ competition for Sasuke. Hehehehe...I hope you're feeling much better. Thanks for the update!
person Yami Jay
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If Sasuke finds out about this... >.< Good chapter