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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person teaspoon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like a very interesting plot, but how are you going to make the switch between ino to sasuke in naruto's mind. I have never like ino for either sasu or naruto but she sounds like a great character here I feel kind of sad that she won't stay with naruto. ANyhow don't worry about how i feel so far the plot is great and I'm sure you'll probably make this story work. Keep up the good work!
person phoenixdown7
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was wonderful. I just love the way Naruto and Ino interact. Their relationship is so real. It only makes me feel sorry that she will eventually be turned down, but that's life right? Very realistic. Keep on writing (not that you won't anyway)! I love this fic! ^^
person blisblop
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a damn fine story happening here.
person blisblop
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello there,writing madly eh?I can not remember if I left a reveiw so here is one.I like muchly.If no one has awncered your ? i will look it up.Thanks.
person Natsu
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww sweet. I'm loving this ficcy so far, I really hope you update soon! ^.^
Ino/Naruto is actually quite cute. :3
MWahaha sasuke getting jealous I love it ^___^!! Yay for Sasu/Naru!
person Monkey Lady
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaa! No more chapters to read! I like it so far and I'm really looking forward to reading more. Nicely done :).
person Hitomi
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[Ch. 5]
Wonderfully sappy. =^_^=



Ja ne~
person teaspoon
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it! update very soon!
person shumei
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeaaaassse update quickly ó__ò
person shu chan
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wohooooooooooo!!! i love this!!! make moremoremore!!!