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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person clowangel
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chapter! And wow, does Sasuke sound posessive or what? hahaha!
person Hitomi
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 4)

Noooooooooooooo!!! I HATE cliffhanges!! You meanie!

Oof. -_-

Update reagulary, or I'll die.
Love this fanfiction too much to wair WEEKS for a single update!
Please!
Mooooore!!!


Until you're nice and give us more,
Ja ne~

=^_^=
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. this is a very good story and it just gets better and better with each chapter.
person Michiru
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much! I really like stories that portray Sakura and Ino how they should be, rather than some sort of spawn of satan. o.o; Sakura's still a little mean in this story, but she can be a little mean in the series too, so I don't really mind it much. A story of friendship between Naruto and Ino is also rather unusual, which also makes the story interesting. Sasuke's behaviour amuses me.. he really does strike me as the jealous type. ^^; I hope Ino and Sakura will be able to patch things up, because I really do think that - despite how much they fight - they really are good friends and that they genuinely do care about each other. Anyway, I look forward to seeing how things unfold in future chapters. Please update soon! :)
person Spellcasterz
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Ino's technique is called shintenshin no jutsu. Not sure though. Update soon.
person kat8cha
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo enjoying this! Sasuke being jealous is one of my favorites looks on the poor boy. I love what you've done with Ino and Sakura, I hate the pink bitch but Ino's really sweet. I really hope Ino can help poor Naru-chan w/ his headaches. More soon I hope?
person ghostninja85
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Do the rookie 9 know about the kyuubi in this fic? I forgot. If not, then Ino is in for an... interesting surprise.

I like how Sasuke is reacting to Naruto's new relationship. Possessive Sasuke is hot. lol.

Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ino, watch out for floating ramen and a certain nine-tailed animal when you're in Naruto's head!! I wonder what Sasuke's going to do? UPDATE SOON!!
person Yami Jay
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She's trying to help... Well, it's fun to see Ino in another way.
person Sky
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really liked your story and just wanted to drop a line and say it. I'm quite enjoying how the story's going so far, it's cool to see how you're having the characters react to each other like that. I hope you keep writing it, cause I'll definitely look it up for further reading. Thanks.