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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person LadySamurai87
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I too HATE Sakura. I wouldn't mind if something terrible were to happen to her. Please update soon.
person clowangel
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another chapter! =) I wish this chapter was longer.. Took less than 3 minutes to read.. ;-;

Hehe, Sakura got the shock of her life, huh.
person ^-^
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice fic, i would love to read more so udapte soon
person ochiba
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going, and I'm looking forward to more. You used 'obfuscated' incorrectly... (it's a verb) or was that the joke? "Next time I'll obfuscate." or the like would be more appropriate. Anyway, I'm happy to see some NaruIno friendship in the making, and delighted that this will be a SasuNaru fic in the end, but pretty please don't rush these boys together with a sudden access of the dreaded "I love you; let's boink" whathaveyou that is prevalent in so many SasuNaru fics x_x Take your time like you're doing already. This has such the potential to be a kick ass amazing fic, especially with it's already fabulicious start. Thanks for the read.
person Ezj
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story has a good start... make the characters as you like them cause it's
your story... all though I can agree on you about Sakura sometimes... geeze
As I were saing good start and do continue it^^ pwease
person evvy
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter! That was just a TEASE!
person lillilly
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I like the way this story is going. I would never had thought to put ino & naruto together as friends. Oh and their banter is priceless, hummm saskue jelouse, I like, I like!
person Dreamers
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to see how this story will continue
person Yami Jay
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Sasuke is jealous!!! Good chapter!