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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person sparrow9
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so glad you are continuing this, its such a cute story. I would never flame a auther who dosn't like a charater if I didn't like it I wouldn't read it. keep up the doog work
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter.

I personally don't like either Sakura or Ino. Ino especially is a rather flat character, and Sakura is really annoying.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Don't worry about the time it takes to update. I know how hard that can be, Just make sure it's up as soon as possible!
person Base
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story those I don't like Naruto/Sasuke, maybe you can make it a Ino/Naruto/Ssuke Three-way
person Mimiruchan
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Oh the Sasuke we all love is here! Update soon!
person ohmylord
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think that your story's great. the whole concept is pretty unique too. And i agree with you, Naruto and Sasuke should be together. So continue?

Oh, and the misspelt words? there were some, but it weren't those GLARING ones. So chill. No big problem. I've forgotten about them after i finished the chap. So yeah..
person ohmylord
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think that your story's great. the whole concept is pretty unique too. And i agree with you, Naruto and Sasuke should TOTALLY be together. So continue?

Oh, and the misspelt words? there were some, but it weren't those GLARING ones. So chill. No big problem. I've forgotten about them after i finished the chap. So yeah..

and one last thing, the title is very good. It's quite rare to find those. I'm ashamed to say this, but its the title that convinced me to read it and not exactly ur summary. So a job well done (its most definately a compliment!)
person koorinohitomi
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I like it! I think it is definitely worth of a sequal, so please continue.
person ghostninja85
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please continue.
person someone
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story with just Naruto and Ino
person EscagirlUK
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! And that sounds just like Naruto. And, yeah, he is kinda dense, isn't he? Hurry and write more!