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for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

by Kalariona

person redtatsu
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tease! Reposting. Leting us readers think its a update. Good thing its dated.(when I remember to look before clicking on the story.)
Ok, here is your groveling and pleading for a new chapter! GROVEL,GROVEL,MUCH PLEADING and FOOT KISSING!!! It hasn't stopped raining in my life since you last updated! Pleeeese, pleeeese update soon:)))
person j_narusasu_c
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At last... the most awaited chapter... Thanks for updating your fic... I really like your fic, especially Sasuke dominating Naruto...
Thank you and Happy New Year.
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaa! You finally updated! -does a dance- Yay!%#@1ytWEt

That was a great chapter. Rawr, sasuke! :P

^^!
person aria
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this story is great! very well written. i like it very much.
i wonder what happens next. Naruto needs to admit his feeling for Sasuke!
hope you update soon~
person mikkie
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... *GASP*............ love it ^^-
person airhead622
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i sat here and read all of these chapters
in one sitting and let me just say
WOW!!

very well written
can't wait till u update
person Missy
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, this may come as a shock to you, but i know the fourth hokage's name, but its a major spoiler, so i dont want to say it here, email me and ill tell you
person missy
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, what the hell....

the fourth hokage was naruto's father, Uzumaki Arashi.

he and his wife had naruto in private, as part of their plan, and naruto's mother died giving birth.....sad, i know!

sasunaru all the way!
person mE
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! so good! Did Ino see them? I mean she was following them right!! Oh god I can't weit for the next chappie!! Type faster :DD Thanks and seeya :D
person AnA La Pana83
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah! What an awesome and intriguing story, and this is my first read of it! I only planned to read the first chap and instead read all of it at one go. Everyone's after our Naruto...the triangle going on here is hot, i must say and the writing and dialogue are very well done. It's funny, Naruto is so friendly with everyone it's almost easy to picture seeing him with anyone (save for maybe Lee) *shivers*. Man if i had to choose bewteen Sasuke and Neji, i wouldn't know what to do. Update soon!