rate_review Reviews

Cool... Your fanfic's cool... very unique... and I LIKE THE LAST CHAPTER!!!! at last, naruto had... with sasuke! at last! and i like sakura's attitude... also tsunade's... ALL in ALL... i really like your fic...

wow! that was one new plot and loveteam! NarutoxIno! but still, nothing beats the very perfect combination of Sasuke/Naruto! I like your story and plot, it's unique! And I like the way Sasuke's jealous of Ino, well, he should! Naruto's his! Well, Thanks and keep up the good work!

ok here goes hun ---So far Ive only read 1st chapter but like what is happening here
its a good way to start story .Carry on ok
I hope it has a happy ending awwwwwwwwwwww

Seeya

Luv ya H xx

This chapter as well as the others so far have been wonderfull! I love how you are pulling off every one's personalities! Also, i really liked the end of this chapter how Naruto and Sasuke were sparing and how it led to naruto pinning him there for of course he won and sasuke still doesn't say "i give" lol. But it was so cute where it led and how naruto was in pain because of the head ach and the whole thing i just pictured it was beautiful! to preshus!

welp, if you havent already been informed...i'vealways heard yondaime referred to as Arashi being his name, if that helps:)

That was amazing! Very well written. I can totally understand what you meant by how when ya proofreead these sorts of scenes it sounds kinda funny. But to the reader, in this case me your writing was wonderful. I loved your choice of description and the way you set it all out.
I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
I hope it works out for sasuke and naruto...ohh this is so interesting.
can't wait to read the next chapter.

it was great!

wow. i really like the story. i've read it all in one sitting so i'm just going to review the whole thing here. i really like that fact that you start the fic of with another relationship. with a lot of fic's there's just the straight jump to yaoi and there's nothing wrong with that, but i like to be able to see how Naruto tries to have a normal relationship. the only thing is that Ino was the last person i expected XD. i love the build up to Naruto and Sasuke's relationship and am really interested in what's going on with the headaches. i also really like that you've added a small story with what's going on between Sakura and Shikamaru. oh and by the way i loved the last scene *drools* can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!! update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ><

you had better continue!!!!

^^ Thank you and I can't wait for more!