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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if I'm a fan of SasuNaru, I can't help feeling sorry for Ino.
It's so sad....Please don't make her suffer when Naruto
breaks up with her.. pretty please *beggs,beggs*
anyway, I really like this story. It's sugoiii
So keep it up and update soon >_<
It's so sad....Please don't make her suffer when Naruto
breaks up with her.. pretty please *beggs,beggs*
anyway, I really like this story. It's sugoiii
So keep it up and update soon >_<
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sas and naruto is my all time fav but plez dont let nar and ino end badly !
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i finally got back with this fic! yey! i love the shikasasu moments of this chapter. sooooooo cute!! i was grinning like crazy, hahaha! i also liked the previous chapter's rabid fangirl moments. sakura and tsunade's reaction after the 2 boys kissed was great. heeeeheeee. funny stuff. i'm curious about he crate in naruto's mind though. hrmm...no idea what it could be, but it makes me even more hooked to this fic, so it's a good thing! thanks for the updates!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love they way you wrote Ino. And I think this is adorable, although I live and breathe Sasu/Naru, I don't think Ino should be written out like she is usually in most Sasu/Naru fics. You know, all bitchy and mean, so out of character.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh. I LOVE this story. L0L I'm reading all the chapters at once so I won't review every chapter XDD.
I am rather fond of Sakura. Well, the Sakura after Sasuke goes missing. She's more mature, but I don't really mind the way you wrote her either :].
HA! And here I was sitting, thinking that Sasuke was going to come waltzing in after like five chapters. You ROCK, poor sasuke-chan is already jealous :DD.
I am rather fond of Sakura. Well, the Sakura after Sasuke goes missing. She's more mature, but I don't really mind the way you wrote her either :].
HA! And here I was sitting, thinking that Sasuke was going to come waltzing in after like five chapters. You ROCK, poor sasuke-chan is already jealous :DD.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story o_o. Poor Ino :[ ; ehh but Sasu/Naru still stands as most important for me ><. And ahh I love your take on Shikamaru and Sakura, they have never even looked eachother in the eye in the anime/manga. But you made them so PERFECT together! I am officially in love with that couple XDD!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! great job!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story even tho nar and sas is my fav pairing over everyone eles i hope ino dose not get hurt to bad update soon ok.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm loving it so far, so please keep going. Sorry if I haven't review it yet, I kinf of forget it, so now I'll say it, your stroy is excellent. Hope to see the next chapter soon and continue your good work! Ja!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some corrections:
"She would have gone anyway, considering she enjoyed the boys company."
boys => boy's"
Talk at the dinner table was boisterous, with laughter
and badly told jokes, then after dinner games and drinks occurred,
until Naruto decided that it was time he went home."
badly told => badly-told
"He kicked a stone and watched it spin down the road and break
against a wall He shouldn’t feel this way about Sasuke."
missing period between "wall and "He."
"She would have gone anyway, considering she enjoyed the boys company."
boys => boy's"
Talk at the dinner table was boisterous, with laughter
and badly told jokes, then after dinner games and drinks occurred,
until Naruto decided that it was time he went home."
badly told => badly-told
"He kicked a stone and watched it spin down the road and break
against a wall He shouldn’t feel this way about Sasuke."
missing period between "wall and "He."