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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LONGER CHAPPIES but then its good ^.^
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHHA!
I love those little conversation between you and the characters!
I also love how this story is fleshing out so far, please be so kindly as to update this soon!
I love those little conversation between you and the characters!
I also love how this story is fleshing out so far, please be so kindly as to update this soon!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... It becomes really interessant! Well, I think your chapters are too shorter... Buhuuu Only a few seconds and I finished to read one.... Noooo, it's unfair!!!! I want more! Pleaase!!!!!!
Nonetheless, I like your story, even if it only begins...! And I like this weird Naruto with all his piercings, hehe!
Nonetheless, I like your story, even if it only begins...! And I like this weird Naruto with all his piercings, hehe!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
‘………Damn third-person speaking habit.’
Haha, that was just too funny. I've been snickering all day over that one.
Haha, that was just too funny. I've been snickering all day over that one.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh, oh!!! The story is developpinf nicely!!! Gaara is a-do-ra-ble!!
And that sweeeet hint of Sasuke's jealousy, yay!
And this chapter was longer than the previous ones, how cool!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update ASAP, please!
And that sweeeet hint of Sasuke's jealousy, yay!
And this chapter was longer than the previous ones, how cool!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update ASAP, please!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um,he will never have children.He is jinchuuriki ,he can have what he wants,death or bare a child oh,I choose life.Nah,no problem.He could have 20 of them if he wanted.The humour is moving things along.The chapters are very short.I guess you knew that.I'll shut up now.Luck with hot sand sex.EEEEch,that sounds kinda painful.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-"5" review (grr you and stupid "chapter 5" of teasing!)
Damn you woman!(Err..or man..never know..) GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you don't update soon, I swear I'll have to go Gaara on your ass, jeez! Bring on the fiction!!! *sigh* So far its beeen rather entertaining, although I will say yet again you need to write more and not soo teasinly short! GAAAH!!! Heh the little Gaara/you things at the end of the chapter are really cute though "Gaara:Liar!........You were looking up naked pictures of me!"-We've all been there before :P
Heh.....enough is enough now write more writing slave! Update or I'll like...ummmm totally cry!
~alisha
Damn you woman!(Err..or man..never know..) GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you don't update soon, I swear I'll have to go Gaara on your ass, jeez! Bring on the fiction!!! *sigh* So far its beeen rather entertaining, although I will say yet again you need to write more and not soo teasinly short! GAAAH!!! Heh the little Gaara/you things at the end of the chapter are really cute though "Gaara:Liar!........You were looking up naked pictures of me!"-We've all been there before :P
Heh.....enough is enough now write more writing slave! Update or I'll like...ummmm totally cry!
~alisha
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo Gaara fic. Lol. I wish your chapters were longer. I look foward to seeing your next chapter ^^.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Yay! Please write more!