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person SpiritFighter
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! I love it. You nearly killed me at the end, because somehow I was expecting Naruto to be thinking that, yet I wasn't O-o. Anyways, it would suck for Lee to get aroused in that suit since it's spandex-y and all. haha. *images* teh bulge!! *dies of laughter*
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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*falls out of chair*

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*finally starts laughing*

That was great! Lee was fantasizing and stuff and Naru-chan is pondering why Lee doesn't pluck his eyebrows! That was great! Funny much! Loved it!
person MistressofDragons
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Wonderfully funny ending. . . but poor Lee. He needs some love. Yay for Lee/Naruto! (and you're right, Lee has to be the seme, at least the first few times.)
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poor Lee! Naruto is so oblivious. They are wonderful together but it's so hard to hook them up. (this is coming from someone trying to write a Lee/Naruto)
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I'm rambling aren't I? Oops. . . anyway I hope to see more Lee/Naruto from you! There is hardly any out there. We need more! More, I say! Fans of Lee/Naruto unite!!!!
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Ummm, I'll be leaving now, ja ne!
person lillilly
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I likes this idea, coul we possibly see sasu's musings about naru too, I love it when he get huffy cause someone else is looking at naru!!!
person S_H
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must admit at first i was quite wary, considering the paring, but I have to say this one had me rolling, very well done, and thanks for sharing. and please dont stop write more lots more.
person Ivy
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was funny as hell. It's like your lead on by Rock Lee's thoughts to actually think that there is something that going to happen between the two of them and the BOOM!

Very good characterization, especially for Naruto. I love it!
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL!!!!!! that was hilarious!
person lalala
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahaha! That was so hilarious!
person Mimiruchan
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say this has to be the most creative fic (pairing wise) I have ever read! xDD Oh poor Lee!