rate_review Reviews

Sorry to hear about your computer dieing...my older one did, and it was a pain getting everything back. Anyway, I read your original post of this, and I really enjoyed it. So, when you get the next chapter up (3), I'll read it and review afterwards.
Later

It really sucks that your comp. died, but please stick with the story. I read the first chapter for the few days it was up and i absolutely loved it. I think you have the makings of a great fic. Also I love the fact that even though Naru is kind of the main character, Orochimaru the goblin king was still kind of going after sasu.

great fic, and good luck