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by Vermaxen

person Betty
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW... that has to be my fave chapter so far! You should definetly consider writing more Gaara/Sakura fics! You captured Gaara's personality very well, and I would love to see this pairing more often! Perhaps you would consider writing a multi-chapter fic with this pairing? I also really enjoyed the Kiba/Sakura chapter! I wonder which pairing you will do for the next 2 chapters? I hope at least one of them will be a Lee/Sakura chap! There just aren't enough of those out there. A Neiji/Sakura one would also be nice. Anyhoo, keep up the good work and I hope to see more Gaara/Sakura fics from you *hint, hint*!
person Maui
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Maui here again! I'm really into that "surprise pairing"... I really hope that the last 2 would be Nejisaku and of course, the infamous Kakasaku. Keep up the Good work!! That plot you used in Gaasaku was good and Cute! Hope yah update soon.
person AmberEyes
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I very much enjoyed the Gaara chapter. Your writing is very entertaining. It's stand out, especially for what it is. Can't wait to find out what the next chapters will be. ^_^
person liika
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhhhhhhhhh I love this fic.. seriously O.O You inspire me! I will write one for you! I love all these pairings XD You should write a NejiSaku cause that pairing rules too wahahaha...

*melts into a pile of goo*
person Lea
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* good chapter. Gaara is one of my fav. as well :)
person brandy
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great!! I hope one of the next two will be NaruSaku its my favorite pairing!!! Plus there are really not alot of those. Pretty Please!!! NaruSaku!!!!
person KittyKristi
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a very very good fic, it surprised me soooo much.. Originally I only read it because I don't see much with Kiba. I'll admit that. And while I don't hate Sakura, I don't like her very much but..

This fic, It gave me a whole new respect for her. You're a wonderful, wonderful writer!! ^_^ Super awesome concept too. Keep writing!!
person Mariam
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Gaara and Sakura one! It was fabulous! Are you sure you're only going to do six? Consider continuing the series? I like these! ^__^ You are fabulous.
person dragonflyelj
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, that was so sweet at the end! Before I say anything else, I absolutely CAN'T wait for the Gaara chapter! You write a HOT lemon! I totally understand what you are talking about with trying to do something that was not done in the previous lemons. After a while it feels like you are just rewording the same thing over again. Kiba was a bit of a shit, ne? I totally saw the Inu Yasha influence in that. Actually that was one of the reasons that I had moved away from Inu Yasha. I got pissed that NO ONE could write a lemon without the ritual biting. You get tired of reading the same things over and over again, and that is what was happening. I think this was my first Shino coupling that I have read, and it rocked! You know, if Kiba took off that hood more often, he is a really good-looking character. It's that fur around his face, I don't like it. I also like the connections that you make. It's not just rip off the clothes and have sex. There is more to it. You give reasons why these two people would be together, and write it in such a way that the reader wants to see them together. I loved the way you did the Shino one. And I didn't notice a bunch of errors which detract from the story, which is always a bonus! ^_-

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!
person love
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! You are going to do a gaara saku! Please make it really really good! I love that pairing along with NejiSaku and kakashi saku. Can you make one of these? (puppy dog eyes)