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for Variety Pack

by Vermaxen

person MysticInca
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, fluffy ending on that one.
*sighs* The curse of a one shot, you get a full story with no wait, but then wish a full story could be made.
Your doing a wonderful job! I know it's gotta be so incredably difficult to write so many different perspectives in such a short amount of time. Let alone the fact that each and every lemon varies from story to story.
So far these stories have made me squirm, giggle and sigh in wanton delight. lol
Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Gaara/Sakura is a personal favorite of my own, could never work in reality, but damn do they look good together.

Mystic~me
person xgirlrogue
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe you cheecky girl

I want a kaka/saku from you - Kakashi is the man. Plus it could be in the future *sigh* never enough kakasaku out there

I love this series! Hope to see more soon and the gaasaku is a favorite of mine as well - also neji and itachi are my personal little demons who I love to see with sakura lol

hmm..... you might need more than 6 chapters......
person am
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aawww, so sweet. I liked the ShikaSasu even more than the one with Kiba. shikamaru was just fantastically in character!!
person AmberEyes
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oddly enough, my favorite is the ShinoSaku so far although nice job on the other two. The way you described the 19 year old Kiba was just delicious. Very enjoyable. Looking forward to the Gaara chapter, because Gaara needs some lovin'. Just wondering though, may this possibly include a Rock Lee chapter in the future? I'm unsure if that could really be considered an "alternative" pairing.
person Maui
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I really wanna read more!! Yay!! GaaSaku next! Uhmm... Will there be a NEJISAKU?? OR KAKASAKU?? I'm just a great supporter of it. And I know that many people nowadays are addicted to Kakasaku and some in nejisaku... So, what?? I wish there'll be!! Update soon and keep it up!
person Lea
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still very good. Good chapter. Keep going!

::L::
person Eris
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was the first ShinoSaku story i've ever read...i've never even considered the pair before, unsure of how they would compliment each other but somehow, someway, you made it work brilliantly. Just everything was perfect - the dialogue the descriptions, gah, it makes me sad it's over. Atleast i still have the KibaSaku to read :D another pairing i haven't considered but am anxiously waiting to read. You said you had six different pairings with Sakura right? Awesome! I have something to look forward to now!
And I agree that the same pairings can get repetitive - that's why yours shines so bright.
Anyway, enough babbling...great story, love your style, keep up the good work, and post those other pairings soon hopefully :d
~Eris
person Kate
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say--I absolutely loved this. My favorite of the two posted now--Shino and Sakura. I had never thought about that pair but I was very cool. I've only just recently discovered this site...and while I'm still new to smut....for some reason it's getting addicting. I keep coming back for more. Every once in a while you find an original story with decent writing.

Hurrah for variety!

Yeah for Shino!

^_______^
person shuruku
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i´m so glad i decided to read your story!! you´ve got an awesome writing style!! you make every pairing turn out believable, a talent most fiction writers never develop at all. finally a story i enjoyed again, thank you! and continue the great work...
person Scurvy
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love these rare pairings. and the one coming up.