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by Vermaxen

person Kim
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story Ideas you have,and how you write them is great.I love all the chapters.They're awsome! I have a Request.Can you do a DeidaraxSakura story/chapter,if you get a chance.

Thank You and keep up the good work!
Kim
person Vera
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love how you... hang on let me find the words... Um... How you showed Sasori's personality. That was a really bad wording for it, but... eh...
person speechless
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By far, I think your Sasori+Sakura one-shot was the BEST. It was a first for me--the themes, the plot, the transition, the characters, everything.

And I absolutely fuckin' loved it.

I only wish you could do some more one-shots (they don't even have to be lemons, frankly) with randoms guys paired up with Sakura.

Anyway, this was a simply gorgeous collection. You are very talented. I hope to read some of your other works in the future.

Yours Truely,
Utterly Speechless

P.S. - Are you on fanfiction.net by anychance? I can't seem to recall where I found your account on adultff.net, but I have a fleeting feeling that it was from a link on ff.net. Maybe off your profile there?
person Ishanatur
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im so impressed your work is amazing keep writing
this is just me personally but i thinnk comedy is the hardest genre it requires a much more intimate knowledge of your characters and people in general than any other writing form angst and smut included
person chocolat
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the shino/sakura fic. Shino's so hot! I don't really like Kiba/Sakura but this was a good chapter.
person Beulah Page
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely floored by this collection...they're all so good I'm having a really hard time deciding on a favorite. But the ShinoSaku is by far the best Shino fic I've read. And even though the KibaSaku cliche would have been a cliche in an Inuyasha fic, it was a fun twist here because it hasn't been hacked to death with a meat tenderizer.

I've been skipping around different fandoms for ages; Naruto has the most possibilities for good pairings, but few people are taking advantage of that. If I had any talent at writing fiction, I'd dive in, but my writing skills end at term papers. Rarepairs are great; I love how you get to explore the characters more in depth, but the best part is that I can believe that any of these actually happened in the Naruto storyline (minus AUs, obviously) because they fit the characters' personalities so well. I've found myself wanting to know what happens next for almost all of them.

It's also refreshing to see het pairings. I've read my fair share of yaoi, but it's very hard to make those fics different from all the others. Sometimes it's interesting to explore those pairings, but sometimes they become ubiquitous and therefore, completely unbelievable. There almost needs to be an upper limit to the number of fics per pairing.

It never ceases to amaze me how polarized feelings are about Sasuke. I think he comes across as an ass because he's, well, emotionally bankrupt. He's so focused on revenge and it's hard for him to trust anyone, and he's got huge reserves of anger that have pushed out any other feelings he may have had, so he doesn't know how to react any other way. So I don't excuse his behavior, but I kind of understand why he does what he does. As for Itachi, you're right; we don't really have anything to indicate what goes on inside that head. Which is why I haven't yet found a believable fic of any pairing with him.
person Saya
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you make another GaaSaku? Those are the best ones of them all!
person sureasdawn
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NejiSaku was HOT!!! I will never look at Neji the same way again. Yum.

I liked your take on Kaka/Saku also. I'm firmly in the camp that believes a relationship between the two requires about ten years added on to their ages and some sort of resolution to Sasu/Saku. As someone trying to write a Kaka/Saku fic, any insights on the pairing are useful, so thanks for providing some pointers on what fans want in your A/N.

XOXO
person ShinjucAt
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this chapter rather odd and perplexing,but still good.Here's a quistion,since this fic is for odd pairrings,do you intend on ever making a Saku/Chouji?If so,please post it,because you never see those.
person Mealyn
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww I luv this!!!