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for Variety Pack

by Vermaxen

person Shi-Sha
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that was one of the best one-shots you've written in this story. It was...amazing.^^ Hope you write more!
person NSU
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just recently got into the SasoSaku pairing and you're giftfic just cemented my adoration of this couple. I have to admit, I was initially dubious of your summary; by eliminating some of the more unusual and taboo of Sasori's characteristics and by making it into an AU I was afraid the aspects that I enjoy the most might have been left out. However you managed to maintain a truly creeping and disturbed atmosphere despite the more neutral context that Sakura and Sasori were placed in. And they were in character. Bravo!

And you're right it's hard to extrapolate how Itachi's character will react outside of the scenes we've seen him in. It's a little easier with Sasuke, because we have all that nice backstory from Sasuke's flashbacks, but otherwise he doesn't really give fanficcers that much to work with. We can only hope Itachi'll show up more, now that the plot's slowly swinging back to Sasuke.

I must admit, I skipped most of your stories and went straight to the SasoSaku. So you need not take this review too seriously.
person ari
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is easily one of the best kakasaku lemon fic I've ever read.
person Kioku
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP. This has got to be the best damn fanfiction (or collection of one-shots) I have EVER read. My favorites were the SasuSaku (because that whole AU theme was goddamn sexy), GaaSaku- which I can't ever stop loving you for, and that SASORIxSAKURA. I admit, I was a bit hesitant on clicking on that chapter, but I am now glad I did. The Alternative Universe with him being an "artist" of an inner self that can be portrayed through such an ugly creation, was the most intriguing aspect of that particular one-shot. I also like how his relationship with Sakura developed. Unbelievably creepy, yet realistic and sexy all the same.

KUDOS BECAUSE YOU DESERVE THEM.

: D If you're still writing, it would be nice to see more SasuSaku (because there just isn't enough love for them- ANYWHERE) and GaaSaku (xD Because you make them look sogoodtogether).
person Robin
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
impressive!
person Phoe-chan
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never really thought I'd see someone write this pairing. Then you did. I and I rejoiced. AND DEIDARA! OMG I was rolling in my seat in fits of laughter. I LOVE Deidara and the way you portrayed him just had me in fits.

A very eerie but very well written lemon. I loved it! And congrats on 20,000 hits!

Phoe-chan the Witty
person Tiamat
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unholy Hell, that was cool. ^_^ I laughed at the end when Sakura started singing Pinocchio's song. Very wicked. I really enjoyed reading the whole Variety Pack!
person Tiamat
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unholy Hell, that was cool. ^_^ I laughed at the end when Sakura started singing Pinocchio's song. Very wicked. I really enjoyed reading the whole Variety Pack!
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much, Sasori was so pretty, and...and... *glee* Anymew! The interpretations of Sasori and Deidara's personalities were really nicely handled. Deidara's delightfully annoying, and Sasori makes creepy sexy. I think I connected best with this last chapter because I'm an artist, and I know what it's like to become really involved with your own work. Or something like that. Do I make sense? Probably not, but it's past my sleepytime....

Sad note: Nyuuuu, I'm fast running out of fics that she can read. 's like all the awesome authors are leaving the fandom and leaving just the badfic authors behind. *sigh* That would be neat if I could write that well. I still owe you lots of doodles, too. *clings to pants leg*
person Lyraelin
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I'm really sad this was the last one. I LOVE the Variety Pack. It is, by far, my favorite of all stories on affnet.