rate_review Reviews

It's been so long since you've been up. Nice stuff, I still love it! Hey feel free to check out RedSliver and my bible of lemons. The idea was definatly inspired by you. Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Oh my. I've just finished reading your chapter with Kaka/Saku and I have to say... well, I'm rather breathless. I truly appreciated your author's note beforehand, seeing as I share as many misgiving's as you do, but you truly have done this pair such justice, that I'm in awe right now.

Truly, it was a moving piece to me, not only because you dealt with it quite beautifully, but in such a way so as to suffuse a lot of feeling and emotion into these two character's that I simply enjoyed this little piece to death. I can see what you mean about having to incorporate some angst into this piece; in short, I feel it would not have been so poignant or fulfilling without it. You have done an excellent job of conveying the complexities and misgiving's and consequences of such a pair interacting. Thank you for writing such a piece, it not only confirms that there are still truly gifted writer's out there, but that there is indeed such quality work to find and peruse.

This particular piece, the Kaka/Saku pairing, was quite nicely written. The pace and style of the piece, easy and flowing and enjoyable to read and follow. Aside from a few typo's, I didn't see any blaring grammatical mistakes, but truly when a piece is this good who cares ne? (Yes, I realize I sound like a gushing idiot, but really I only do that when I've enjoyed a piece that really merits my attention... not that I'm anyone of great importance in any matter, but you truly made me think during this little ficlet ;))

Honestly, I had misgiving's about delving into a story with such a wide range of pairing's but after reading your intro note, you can be assured that I will continue to read through more of your work. I confess, I had only meant to skim through and read the Sasu/Saku pairing, but seeing how well you've done, I'll be sure to check out some of your other pairing's as well... however unconventional they may seem to me.

You know you've done a good job when you convince a reader to go beyond their normal boundaries of conventional pairing's to go and seek out those that wouldn't normally have piqued their interest otherwise.

Excellent work, hope to see more from you...

~Kir

Another vote for NejiSaku, Itasaku or SasuSaku ^_^.(my fav. pairs)

Or;

-Odd pair / rare pair-
GenmaSaku
IbikiSaku (I have seen once)
OroSaku (^^" poor sakura.)
KabutoSaku

damn! u got me cheerin for ur story!!! keep this thing goin!! email me if u got more update!! i wanna see more!!!! votin for itachi and saku!!!!!! so far gaara, neji, shika, shino and kaka are excellent!!!!!! hoot hoot!

damn! cant hold it anymore!! it's freakin good!!! so far i've read four so far and couldnt hold my comments any longer!! gaara epi wasnt as high as shika or shino *drool* lol....but gaara was sweet really...kiba....hmm..i'll put him last on the list of the four guys so far lol....continue the good work though i would love to see a kaka and a itachi one too..if u got any more updates plz email me!!! wanna keep on readin ur work!

If you have plan for next couple I would like to request Nejisaku or SasuSaku (or HinaSaku,incase of yuri) .

Because I always like Sasusaku and I like the idea about SakuNeji and HinaSaku.

No.2 is SakuKakashi, but I could picture them as couple only in vague imagination ‘cause I don’t know how Kakashi-sensei look like under his masks[^_^]” (yes, he wore more than one layer mask, what a freak!).

I don’t mind SakuX Shino, Kiba,Gaara since I never have seen they had interactive in main storyline before.
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But *I really very dislike NaruSaku*, probably because I felt Sakura look older than Naruto.
(^^” apologize for Sakura’s fan but this is only my opinion.)

Probably because Naruto’s behaviors (and his face) always look like childish when compared with Sakura while Sakura look more mature than him.

Plus she always lectured, berated and hit Naruto (-_-“) like big sister, teacher or even mother!

Which was quite make me felt awkward when I tried to picture them as couple in adult relationship. (Just best friend that enough for their relationship).
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I found that I’m very impress in your SakuNeji probably because I felt their relationship have something more than just het or lust (I’m not sure but I felt hint of angst? romance? restrain love?).

Especially, the ending of NejiSaku chapter, very beautiful. That made this chapter like angst romance story more than ordinary lemon story.

You should write consequent or create another NejiSaku Story [^_~]

Gah @_@ all of these could have sequels... especially the kibasaku and the nejisaku ones... I really liked the shikasaku one. I thought you had a good grasp at how those 2 would interact together. And I DO agree that the Naruto fandom doesn't have a whole lot of variety in the couple section (even though it should!).

Yo! Heheh i just read Naruto Sakura! I have to admit i usualy don't read Naruto, i like the suporting charicters hehe. ANyways i read yours and it was really really good!!! How do you write so well!!! makes me feel inadiquet *pout* lol anyways you are just amazing and oh my god you just, you nail feelings and emotions soooo well. It makes me soo happy! You need to write more! You really really do!!! Ahh i just GA! I love it! IT's too much to much *head overload head overload* oh and were Naruto says you could have shown up wereing nothing too cute! ANd I like the descreption of his body YUM! And and the apalgy stuff too cute!!! AHh i love you!!!!!!!!!

Hey, I really liked your fics especially the Naruto/sakura and Kakashi/Sakura. I am totally in love with those pairings, but I also liked the first Gaara/Sakura. Your very talented in writing and I enjoy your author notes too.

THIS IS SOOO KOOL!!!!!! Please, please, please, can u do an ItachiSakura fic?! PLEASE, I'M BEGGING U!!!!!!!!