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by Vermaxen

person allyluv17
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very nice!!! it was so good i wanted to jump around the room and scream out my cheers for this chapter. your stories are simply awesom!!!
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More GaaraSakura! Mmmm, Kazekage. X3 I love how you give her such an attitude. So yum! Nyuuu, lookit, you've gone and made me go all fangirlie, so I can't leave you an intelligent review. Meh, I'll simply have to draw more fandoodles. Ah well...
person dark_Angel
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SCORE! another Gaara/Sakura =D awesome...I think you should do a sequel to this one though...there's enough plot to keep it going...but keep up the fab work and do another one soon!!
person xgirlrogue
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo good! I love gaara
this was just wonderful - but you took too long too update! you need to write more - right now!
and I loved this gaara - lets face it he's changing in the series nd I think this is a reasonable side to his character
hope to see more soon
person Lyraelin
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. You are a godsend to the Naruto fandom. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for the gift!! It was amazing!
person Karista
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. I was apprehensive to read at first, figuring it'd be a collection of PWP with nothing to offer but smut (not that it's a bad thing, just not 8 chapters worth). I love how each story had a tangible base leading up to the sex, that it just wasn't to get the characters in bed as many M/F writers have become. Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to look at your other stories.
person Redsliver
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It refreshing to see well written alternative pairings. I particularly liked the Kiba Sakura pairing because I have never seen it anywhere before.
Lady Dementia's portrayal of the characters fits into what I have come to expect or could extrapolate from the mold given in the manga. The situation into which she has placed our heroine are both entertaining and believable for Naruto. Her style and pacing complemented her stories allowing for a quick and fulfilling read. I hope to see more by this author in the future.
person Lyraelin
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing. I especially love the NejiSaku lemon because there wasn't a clear lemon. It was threaded into the story really seamlessly. I loved it.
person allyluv17
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man! i read all the chapters in one night. it was SOOOO good. initially, i thought some of the pairings were ODD and was thinking in my head, "NO WAY CAN THOSE PAIRINGS WORK OUT" but boy! was i wrong after reading them. I LOVED IT!!! please write more. it's awesom!!!!
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The NejiSaku was gorgeous, almost every description of him actually made me squee. As usual, it was an enjoyable read. *adds more to her list of doodles to send*