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for Variety Pack

by Vermaxen

schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have this sudden urge to illustrate the whole thing, all of them, put it into a comic or something, I loved it so much. The KakashiSakura was so hot, I feel so ashamed of my attempts at it, as it's my favorite pairing. I feel horrible, but I loved it, I'd beg for more, but I don't want to be annoying. This has to be one of my favorite collections, and I mean that. Much love.
person PiPiNsSong
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, do the SakuNeji pairing. I mean, ovbviously it looks like you've read the whole manga that's out there, so you know that Neji does start to be more nice to Hinata ever since he (i guess you could call it this) learned his lesson from Naruto. I say go for it
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hokai. I'm going to do a big, multi-chapter review.

The GaaraSaku was great, Gaara was so in character and I loved it. The way you work in Sakura's little mannerisms, like talking to herself and the body language is great. The little game between Naruto and Sakura was so cute, and Naruto was particularly yummy. The AU SasuSaku was so well done and absolutely priceless! I'm going to have to read your whole AU story, now. So well done.

I must aspire to be as good as you in characterisations and variety in my writing. T ^ T You are so my hero, now. Oh, and just so you know, I've already got some drawings done. XD
person nuri_chanka
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NejixSakura!!! Please I want to read about them in one of your chapters :D
person Kari
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These vignettes are fantastic! I adore them. You actually made me a believer in the Gaara Sakura pairing. Ah, they said that it couldn't be done... Thanks for your work!

I used to write B & V back in the day, oh, that means Bulma and Vegeta btw. Oh the shame! maybe? of doing fanfic for DBZ! (my boyfriend won't shut up about it, and then he told his friends, and now they won't either. Bastard). But anyway, if you're at all interested in reading something like that, I have a one-shot entitled "touch" on fanfic.net.
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ShikaSaku is so very hot, and your portrayal of Shikamaru is very well done. I love this whole collection the more I read it.
person psycobunnyfire
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp!* I hated Neji for being a jerk to Hinata as well, but let's say, he's redeemed imself in my heart. I really like this little experiment of yours (My fav so far is the Saku/Shino).^^
person Gemini
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent series of stories. I especially liked your take on Kakashi and Sakura. Well done!
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I demand more Shino! I think I'm hyperventalating, but you wrote him so well, he was wonderfully sexy, so hot, and absolutely adorable. Will you ever write some more? If I draw something for you in return, I'm willing to do a trade, artwork for more Shino? Pleeeeease? *beg plead grovel*
person Lyraelin
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESSSS!!! You added! I LOVE the Variety Pack. I can honestly say that every single story is terrific (My personal favorite is the ShikaSaku one, but that's just me). You are fabulous. I love it. I love YOU. You rock.