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for Will you be there when I fall?

by LemonGoddess

person Karista
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was well written, but I think Iruka's a bit OOC here. I can see him being broken up about Kakashi leaving, but I don't think he'd be as fragile as to start cutting himself. Self-inflicted pain isn't exactly something honorable, and I'd give the man a little more credit. Other than that, I can't wait to see how Genma features into this.
person kimiko
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg the suspence! the drama!
moore!
you gotta write more!
*attacks you* ^.^
person Yami Jay
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Odd couple, but I like this fic ^^