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for Dead Flowers

by Ninjacat

schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Despite the creepy nonconsent (which is pretty messed up as you state yourself) this was a pretty good story. It was well-written and emotional and fairly IC if one is willing to overlook the improbability of Sakura molesting an unconscious Sasuke. Even so, I'm glad I read it. I liked it otherwise. Have any non-creepy ones? ^_~
person Mukki
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Just Wow. I'm not a big SakuSasu fan, but that story was incredible. You are one amazingly talented author. And I never say that unless I mean it. This story is really old, so I don't know if you'll read this review, but if you do, just know I think you're very gifted.
person wraithguardstar
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Ilikeit, i forget if i reviewed before, but you are certinaly on my favorites. A very good represendation of desperation.
person elle
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great. It would've been funny to see Sasuke wake up and find the mess.
person SakurakoSagara
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I might cry. and oddly enough, I was not disturbed by that fic. Just... saddened for Sakura. Sasuke is blindly by his overwhelming desire for revenge and to kill and its all so horrible for him, and also horrible for Sakura. I liked the fic and I liked the style of the writing, and I think that you captured the essence of a girl, driven by pain and suffering.
person LadyJ
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Lovely and very well written. I commend you ^^
person dream_queen
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is good but I thought it was strange and I loved it and I don't like happy endings anyway unless the lovers suffer...a lot.
person Kira-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. That was kind of dark. I mean it wasn't like grotesque or gorey or anything. But it sort of made me shiver after reading it. In a creeped out sort of way. But in the best possible kind of creeped out sort of way. Or something.

Anyways.

It would have been sweet if he had woken up at the end. I take it he's in a coma, or something similar, and it made me laugh (later, because I couldn't summon a laugh while reading it, mind you) to think what Sakura would have to say to explain how she had woken him up. To the hospital staff and such. And to Sasuke. Anyways. It was a funny though while it was still lodged deep inside my brain, in an area that normally houses things that don't make much (any) sense.

Well. Great job. Five stars! Yaay stars!
person Finality
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. That's all I have to say. This was the first Naruto fanfic I ever read, and that was a few months ago. I just felt like reading it again, and I realized that I hadn't reviewed. I love this story. Continue it. >)

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person Agnes
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great 1stchap! When are you going to update? I love to see DarkSakura's, so please continue soon!!!!!