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February 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What a heart wrenching story this is. Full of agony and painful love. Despite all that.. i still love this fic. The only annoying thing was the wweird symbols and i have to guess what word it is.
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February 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
the best Naruto fan fiction ever written >
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Action, adventure, romance, happiness and sorrow, twists and turns and an ending that will both break your heart and raise your spirits.
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August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Best story I've ever read. I was hoping for an "I love you" from sasuke or naruto but I loved it so much. Kinda made me cry though
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I found this story on fanfiction.net and I decided to come read it here because I promote SasuNaru everywhere I go. lol It was really very beautifully written and well done. I am sad because it was a melancholy story, but I feel like you ended it perfectly. It really couldn't have been done another way. If you'd tried to save everyone it would have turned out cliche and not that great. So good for you for making the hard choice to kill someone off but to keep the story good. I really enjoyed it. Excellent job.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I originally found this on fanfic but came here hehehe
I think its so cool you write two versions.
I think its so cool you write two versions.
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness....this story was amazing. I can't even put how i feel into words....im just like....omg. this story was so incredibly well-written. you captured every character perfectly. i loved it so much. it was so creative and touching...i rarely am moved by fanfics but this one-this one really pulled at my heartstrings. i was close to tears. i HATE sad endings...but i couldn't really imagine it ending any other way. Thank you so much for a wonderful story. i will never forget it.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks ass, I'll definitely be re-reading it again, even if it does make me bawl like a baby XP XD
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cried. "Walking Corpse," how apropos.This was a good story. The battle tactics and using Orochimaru and the Atasuki so often was to coincidental. What about Konaha's allies? Why didn't Jiraya get info about the attack before Naruto? But, this was a good story. Thank you for writing it. :)
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Truly a job well done.
I wasn't expecting this ending (I may have missed the genre) and it really made my heart ache when I read it but it was fitting and well-written.
I like how the love of Naruto for Sasuke seems uncertain at times. And was a paradox: he wanted to leave with him but he didnt because he would kill him. And Sasuke, though would seem OOC depending on interpretation, was really in character to me. When he wants something he's stubborn about getting it. Which in this case was Naruto. He's smug that way. At the same time he's really broody so he sulks and gets all emo.
But girls, I suppose, find it cool. 0.o :))
I actually saw this fic in ff.net but switched here because omg, shounen ai is the shit. LOL! I hope to see more of you works and though this story was done a long time ago: Congratulations. I really enjoyed reading this.
I wasn't expecting this ending (I may have missed the genre) and it really made my heart ache when I read it but it was fitting and well-written.
I like how the love of Naruto for Sasuke seems uncertain at times. And was a paradox: he wanted to leave with him but he didnt because he would kill him. And Sasuke, though would seem OOC depending on interpretation, was really in character to me. When he wants something he's stubborn about getting it. Which in this case was Naruto. He's smug that way. At the same time he's really broody so he sulks and gets all emo.
But girls, I suppose, find it cool. 0.o :))
I actually saw this fic in ff.net but switched here because omg, shounen ai is the shit. LOL! I hope to see more of you works and though this story was done a long time ago: Congratulations. I really enjoyed reading this.