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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^ * + ... please? I just remembered this story, it's plain cruel to not continue...*whines*
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is the ONLY fanfic that i have ever considered telling my friends about. you could be a professional author in my opinion.
i love this story. you think of so much detail. you think about so many things to make the story interesting. naruto's hair, neji fighting the son of his father's murderer, gaara's demon and kyuubi being attracted to each other, naruto getting close to the sand siblings... i could go on and on. everytime i run into one of your awesome ideas, i'm like...wow, what a great idea, that could really happen too, why didn't i think of that.
i also love how the characters are still really close to the anime. i've read other fanfics that make me feel like what i am reading has absolutely nothing to do with naruto. every character is believeable and so is every turn in the plot. so many fanfics are really farfetched that i can't continue reading them. its too annoying.
well anyway, i just want you to know that this is my favorite fanfic i have ever read and i think you are the most talented author that i have read on the internet. you really have a gift.
i dread and desire the next chapter at the same time. will you save all of your readers from heart ache? and let naruto live. but i don't see any way out of naruto having to die, as finding a quick fix might seem too convienent...corny. but if you want don't want to make me cry, i have full confidence in your writing abilites. you could let naruto live and it could make sense.
but either way, please update soon.
and if you ever need someone to read through your stories (even if they are not based on the naruto anime) to check spelling and grammar (i'm assuming that's what a beta reader is) in the future, i would be more than happy to do that for you. i always got A's in grammar/english so i think i would do well.
this is getting way too long...thanks again for writing such an awesome story!
i love this story. you think of so much detail. you think about so many things to make the story interesting. naruto's hair, neji fighting the son of his father's murderer, gaara's demon and kyuubi being attracted to each other, naruto getting close to the sand siblings... i could go on and on. everytime i run into one of your awesome ideas, i'm like...wow, what a great idea, that could really happen too, why didn't i think of that.
i also love how the characters are still really close to the anime. i've read other fanfics that make me feel like what i am reading has absolutely nothing to do with naruto. every character is believeable and so is every turn in the plot. so many fanfics are really farfetched that i can't continue reading them. its too annoying.
well anyway, i just want you to know that this is my favorite fanfic i have ever read and i think you are the most talented author that i have read on the internet. you really have a gift.
i dread and desire the next chapter at the same time. will you save all of your readers from heart ache? and let naruto live. but i don't see any way out of naruto having to die, as finding a quick fix might seem too convienent...corny. but if you want don't want to make me cry, i have full confidence in your writing abilites. you could let naruto live and it could make sense.
but either way, please update soon.
and if you ever need someone to read through your stories (even if they are not based on the naruto anime) to check spelling and grammar (i'm assuming that's what a beta reader is) in the future, i would be more than happy to do that for you. i always got A's in grammar/english so i think i would do well.
this is getting way too long...thanks again for writing such an awesome story!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um...i guess i should give you my email if you ever want me to beta for you?! slimcascade@hotmail.com
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea what you have done to me. I just can't get this story out of my head today. I've been reading the past 3 days and now there is no more to read, so I just think about it. its really sad. But I had an idea about what you could do for the ending. kinda like what you did for the story line. you made a yaoi story and a friendship story. What if you made an ending where Naruto dies and then one where they find a way to subdue kyuubi and he can live!!!! That would make me sooooooooo happy. just a thought. *vows to self* i will not review walking corpse again...at least not until the next chapter comes out.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I frogive! :ribbit: Nevermind, dumb joke... :sigh:
Anyways, its all good, love your story, hope to see little chapter baby 19 soon! I'll buy it little booties for the baby shower, and give it a matching reveiw!
Anyways, its all good, love your story, hope to see little chapter baby 19 soon! I'll buy it little booties for the baby shower, and give it a matching reveiw!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what is taking so long for the new chapter?????? if you need a temporary beta reader.... i could do it for you.... i just hated that cliff hanger that you left us with..... that was too meeeeeeeeaaaaannnnn... so email me if you need a beta reader... bye
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, i love this story soo much! i found it awhile back and read as far as was up, and recently rediscovered it. it's seriously one of my favorite Naruto fanfics out there. i love the entire concept, and i'm really impressed that you managed to get such a great idea combined with great battle scenes. i also looove Naruto's hair. i hope the next chapter can be put up soon! i mean, i'll always be interested in this story (i just reread the entire thing within the last few days even) but i'm still really really curious what will happen next. so please update! i'll platonically-love-you-even-though-we've-never-met even more if you do! hahaha...
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fanfic, and I also like to draw, so I put my two likes together and drew a fanart for your fic!
Here it is:
http://crescens.xepher.net/manual/fanart/good/other/big/01.jpg
Please keep writing, I really want to see this story finished!
Oh, and if you have a lot of free time, I'd really love it if you visited my site. Thanks.
http://crescens.xepher.net
Here it is:
http://crescens.xepher.net/manual/fanart/good/other/big/01.jpg
Please keep writing, I really want to see this story finished!
Oh, and if you have a lot of free time, I'd really love it if you visited my site. Thanks.
http://crescens.xepher.net
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what happened to the update at the end of the week? it's been a month at least. please update
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of my favorit fic's and I REALLY NEED an update so PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crys in corner* All I want is an update*starts to sing* all I want is an update for christmas I promis you can keep the toy I just REALLY want an update and some boys fucking other boys *continues that song* (*turns away* I don't know her but an update would be nice)
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster