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for Walking Corpse

by suomynonakun

person TwlightDreamz
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you planning on updating anytime soon? Just curious. Um could you do me a favor if it's not to much trouble can you send me a quick e-mail telling me that you updated? I don't remember if I asked already but just in case I didn't could you?Anyway Ja Ne
person goosheikka
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What will happen next? Oh please tell me you're gonna update soon!!! PLEASE! Many people are waiting, no... angling for it. We need to know what will happen next. Will Naruto die? Oh, please don't let him die!!! But anyway, you ARE the writer and whatever decision you have to make on the story, it's yours and I trust you'll do a good job on it considering what a great job you did on the story! PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!! THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR SHARING A VERY INSPIRING STORY!!! Lav yah!
person lalalala
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did you die? *poke*

....I'm gonna feel really bad if you are dead. But then again, how would I know?
person shinara
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was by far the greatest story I've ever read! Hell...that's want I want to actually happen in the manga or series GEEZZZ this is too good I can't stop reading over and over again!! XDDD

Gambatte yo...and please the continuation ^_^ We readers would appreciate that a lot!!!

thankies... ^_~
person ismus
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness, i'm addicted. for the last two days i've been doing nothing but reading this fic or waiting for the time i would be allowed to resume reading it (damn school, i say... not that i'd been doing anything else than thinking about your story there anyways. tried, but proved impossible). your style is great, so is the plot. the distinguishable feeling i get when reading it resembles something i've experienced with a only a few books. of grammar i know nothing, since i'm not a native english-speaker, but i doubt i'd spot any mistakes even if i were, for the story is absolutely gripping (damn commas, i'm clueless). what i wouldn't give to get to the next chapter already... the waiting is eating me inside out.
person Aku-chan
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
According to the thingy you posted this author's note on October 31st and it's now november 28th! That's more than a week. ;_;

Well, I'm new to reviewing this story(cause I just read the whole thing last night) and I'd LOVE if you continued it soon...I really need to know what happens. cause it's just so great. You have them very well in character, and your plot is awesome. I like your style of writing and it being a Sasunaru fic makes me happy. ^^ I know how busy life can be-it's stopped me from updating on FFN lots of times. Just do the best you can. Hope you can update soon!
person S.
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of all the fanfics I've ever read about Naruto, this has honestly got to be the BEST one EVER! All I could ever think about in class was what was going to happen next, because I had to stop reading and head off to class! I'm lucky that you had seventeen chapters up already and I only have to wait for the next ones, but, PLEASE DON'T KILL NARUTO *cries* I can totally understand if you do, but it would be really sad, and I couldn't see Sasuke living after that. I'd cry, a lot. Lol. Anyway, yeah, do what you're planning and expect many tears if Naruto dies... but I'll forgive you if you kill him because this story is so awesome! Keep it up, and be sure to write loads more fanfics, because you honestly rock!
person azamaria-chan
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. This is amazing. Absofuckinglutely amazing. You've woven a wonderful and intense plot and created a wonderful characterization of the shinobi of the Naruto world. I read this through one entire sitting, I honestly could not stop reading. I love the way you've written the Sasuke-Naruto relationship making it believeable and in character as well. You've done a greatgreatgreat job with this fic and I can't wait to read more. Til the next chapter!
person Twlight Dreamz
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been more than a week if I still have all my fingers attached and are using them right (... then again I only need seven of them...) oh well please update soon it's very hard to wait on the next chapter when the story is so dam good. Anyway is it safe to asume that Sasuke and Naruto are in love? please don't keep the two seperated for two long to much stress worring about if naruto actually dies or sombody else does dont kill off any of the 14 main ninja frinds or their sense's!!!!!!! And does sasuke come to the rescue? aahhh two many dam question's and not enough chapters to answer them!!! So please if you get any time which I (...seriously doubt...) give me an email and tell me when you update, Please? Just a quick 'chapter's here' will suit just fine. Thank you so much!!! oh by the way before I forget, where the hell did you learn to write so dam well? I must say your writing style is very original and change is much apreciated. Keep up the good work and you shall go far in life(lol i seriously need to shut up now) Ja Ne thank you for your time.
person CherryBlossom
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah I'm such an Idiot!!! I can't believe I never reviewed!! Your story is amazing! I love gaara But love Saske and naru more. So the intimate moments made my skin crawl I was getting mad for sasuke! What a loser I am. oh well the battle is hot as hell!!!!! Does anyony come to Naruto's rescue? Please don't let Naruto leave Sasuke That would be depressing!! And I would know trust me. Keep up the good work! I know, I know cheezy words but A lot of meaning behind the overusage. I love your fic laterz_ Long live Sasu n Naru (most hottest cupple)