rate_review Reviews

I REALLY am enjoying this story!! You are obviously putting a major amount of effort into this and it is paying off. Slight spelling and grammatical errors do little to detract from my enjoyment. Keep up the good work!

Awsome story so far but I just wanted to say that Gaara's(woohoo!! Gaara RULES!!!!!) eyes are green. ^_^

Hee. Still love you! ~_^ Author's notes and all.

It amuses me that the reality you're discussing is kind of coming true in recent chapters of the Naruto manga (fan-translated, around 280), namely Jiraiya developing that talisman because, apparently, Naruto's been losing control quite a bit in the years he's been training with him.

I genuinely want to know how this turns out. Your work is great, and I love how it gets dark without getting cheesy, despite the liberties you've taken (not a bad thing at all). Keep up the great work!

hope you get the chance to updatse sooner. you have a great story. keep on rockin. \m/

First off, I'd like to point out just how shocked I was when I realized that for once, I'd never read anything that was in anyway, shape, or form like yours. That in it's self is just a sign of an amazing writer with plenty of creativity. Second, I love yours conflict of interst being the fact that Naruto is losing to Kyuubi and that casuing a problem with his relationship with Sasuke the side conflicts being the fights, problems with Oro, etc. also hold a sense of power that I really enjoyed reading.

I didn't really see to many spelling and grammer mistakes, but then again, I wasn't really looking out for them. I was more concerned with what was happening in the plot then I was how you were spelling everything. But, i'm sure that they were down to a minimum if they were there at all. :)

I don't have much time to finish, so, i'll just end this by letting you know that I loved it, and really can't wait to read more. That cliffhanger is driving me crazy!

~:Innocent*Seduction:~ (Formerly known as WynterMajik)

This is a beautifully written story. I wish there were more intelligent authors like you in all of the fandoms. Keep up the great work, I can just imagine the amout of brain power this story takes.

hey there. i just spent an enormous amount of time reading chapters 1-17 and it was awesome ^___^ i can't believe i've reached the end (of the available chapters at least) and arrived at a major cliffhanger! ah, the pain. but knowing that an update is just around the corner makes me feel a ton better, hehe. i totally love this fic -- the characterization, the plot, battles --- everything's great. i have to mention that when Naruto turned Gaara's desert coffin to glass has got to be one of the most coolest, most awesome thing i've read in a fic ever. that was just too cool to forget. thanks for writing such a wonderful story, and i'm definitely waiting for the next installment =D

Cool...there some of english Naruto FFs which I like but this one of the best^^ Hope that the next chapter will come soon.
From a german yaoi fan
mangacrack

(Author's Notes)
Take your time, since it'll benifit us all ^_^