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Hey, I'm glad you only need to revise - I'd thought something horrible had happened to you (and I hope that nothing bad *did* happen..)

In any case, I look forward to reading a new chapter, as always. :D

-gets all excited then face vaults- D'oh!!!

Lol. At least we know it'll be up soon, thanks for tellin! -waits impatiently- ^_^;;

Oh wow. This was great! This is really emotional too! I thought I was going to cry why Naruto said that he was afraid to cry T_T!! I love this. It's beautiful with its twists and turns. I can't wait to read the end, though some part of me doesn't want to know.

Wow. Just Wow. Nice way to leave someone totally breathless, and craving more. I like everything about this, the mentions of Naruto/Gaara (the demons inside them), the angsty tragedy that actually made me cry. I loved that scene, where Naruto asks Sasuke to kill him, when the time comes, and I just started sobbing uncontrollably. I like the molesation of the demon holders when one of them breaks out, Naruto's sacrificial attitude, the amazing battle scenes. You proved to me (the smut fanatic) that you don't need it [smut] to have this mindblowing, breathtaking action, dramatic, passionate story about protecting the ones you love, about pride, about love, lust, and human emotions, how everyone is scared of death, how Naruto and Gaara live with demons inside of them, constantly afraid, that one of them will break out and kill and maim their loved ones. The tragedy of knowing that soon, you will die is so touching, and Naruto's line: I want you to be the last thing I feel is so heartfelt and so... just so tear-jerking. I usually don't stick around to read stories more than 10 chapters long, but this drew me in, diverted my whole attention (I've been walking into door frames, tables, and walls for quite a while now) just thinking about this makes me want to cry, laugh and hug the characters all at the same time.

This is good really! But I thought the multiple attacks by Orochimaru got pretty tiring after awhile. (Yes I read 17 chapters in one go...) Hopefully this will be the last attack. :)

By the way do you have a list or something so that I know you have updated the fic. :) Thanks

First off let me congratulate you on a wonderful story. It is one of the few original stories I’ve come across, plus you have practically every single couple I adore. You would not believe how hard it is to find a story like that, one with an actual plot that is. Not that I don't like a senseless story every once in a while but the true gems are those with an actual developed plot. Next item on the list. *HUGS* THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. The fact that you have every couple I adore, from hints of Neji and Tenten to Sakura and Lee, Shinkamaru and Inu ^.^ Iruka and Kakashi ahhh (Can’t remember if there are solid hints of Kiba and Hinata or if that is my wishful thinking but still) ^.^ Thank you. Also you and your beta do a wonderful job since I have found only one or two grammatical errors (which usually drive me up the wall, heck I don't even read the newspaper anymore because I would automatically pick a pen up and start correcting all the errors I found - in a NEWSPAPER jeez) so I’m deliriously happy with you story. Now if it is not too troublesome please update the story. I understand life can be a pain (4th year University student talking from experience) but I would love to know how it ends. Also could there be a little more romance between all the couples (I know that is a lot to ask but just a little, I'm not asking for hard core smut - although I wouldn't say not to it! Just a little more couple moments). That's all I have to say. Thank you and please keep up the good work.

I really suck at feedback but I just wanted you to know that I spent the past 4 hours just bawling my eyes out over this fic. Like breath-wrecking mucus-flowing sobs.

Please continue your story! It's my favorite!

Saw it recommanded thought I've give it a try. Always looking for something different. Like what I've read so far.

Guess Ino won't be poking in just anyone's head anymore or for awhile. Nice chapter.