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for Walking Corpse

by suomynonakun

person ladygizarme
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgoddess, your writing is awesome! i haven't been able to read for awhile so i had like 2 chapters waiting for me to read i think... your descriptions of the battles and sasuke's level 2 cursed seal were extremely good, especially... i've just seen it in the anime and it is FAREAKY!! w/out the wings though i think sasuke's kind of an exotic-looking-beauty like that though... though it barely looks like the real him.. but anyway, back to the matter at hand... omgoddess, what's gonna happen now that the seal's completely broken? will naruto be able to gain control again?? is sasuke gonna go level 2 again? does he even have the energy for that? is hinata gonna be ok?? eeeeeeek *bites nails waiting for more updates* hope there's more soon!!
person Bluey
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....
I have to admit.... this fic is awesome. I don't usually read a fic if it involves losing my precious beauty sleep, and I definitely don't leave a review unless I feel it to be necessary. Too troublesome... hehe.

Anyway, in this case I feel it absolutely necessary for me to leave a review to beg you to continue writing this fic.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

Well, now that is done, I shall go to bed. Hopefully I won't drive myself crazy guessing the possible endings to your fic.
person Donna
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I'm SO addicted to it. Your writing skills are incredible and you always keep me on the edge of my seat drooling for more.... It is just an incredible piece of work. Never get tired of it -- your descriptions of the characters are amazing. Great job in keeping them in character, and great job with keeping the story interesting. I love everything about this story!! I can't wait til the next chapter. Until then I'll just have to keep re-reading it. Hee. Keep it up! <3
person Missa
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, can't remember how many fics there are-- Naru goes missing, comes back, SasuNaru takes place, big war-- I love this story out of them all! Well, if I can I remember the other ones...
person blisblop
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is getting very tense,lovely.
person Miku
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is such a wonderful fanfic!
I'm usually not one to read yaoi and I was a bit hesistent at first to read this, but I certianly don't regret it.
You write the action perfectly, something that I would espect from the Naruto anime and manga. The romantic tension between Sasuke and Naruto is woven perfectly. This story puts in a lot of darker twists in Naruto than I would've thought. I never considered the possibility of the Kyuubi being like Shukaku and trying to take over the host while he were sleeping. Another thing I like about this, is that, even though Sasuke and Naruto are your main focus, you also go through what's going on in the other characters heads and how they feel about everything.
So, all in all, this fic kicks ass! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person fyredevyl
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!!! You updated! I really love this story. The plot, the style, everything, is really well-done. Keep up the good work! ^_^
person Puppyslut
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aghhhhhhh.
I can tell, this wait will be agonizing.
I'm actually really interested in what happens in this story, which is strange.....because I usually just look for good smut.
XD!
Anywho. Keep it up, and if you send out Update Emails, definitely let me know when the next chapter comes around.

-Pupslut.-
person GS*
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww nooo! it ended! wwahhh. but sasuke's vision came tru. i really wanna read the rest! ahh soo good. it'd b soo cool if this was like a extra to the series. XP. i'm weird. well plz update soon!!! ahh the suspense!!! >_<
person RavenWings
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Dies from a heartattack* .....OH! MY! GOD!!! Okay, I'm having a *hell* of a lot of trouble thinking of a fanfic with a worse cliffhanger than that! Hell, I'm having problems thinking of a *novel* that has a worse cliffhanger than that! *Falls over* That was sooooooo evil! You'd better get that next chapter out fast, or your gonna lose all your readers from death by shock! ^^;;; Gahhhhh.... Lol, though I'm sure you're happy to get the reaction you were pro'lly going for, pleeeeease post the next chapter soon? I know *I'll* forgive you for this chapter taking so long to get out as long as the next one comes out soon! ^^' Very very VERY good, please post more!